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Reviewer: larkpie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2018 7:59 AM Title: Fated meetings

Wowie, this is well-written. I read a bit, in the middle actually, haven't gone through the beginning. 

So, wow. Good stuff, I want to say. I don't think I'll ever finish it, due to my abject hatred of the omnipotence fetish, and that's not ragging on you or anyone who likes it, that's purely me. I think I'll be recommending this though, and definitely looking through your works. 



Author's Response:

I'm gload you enjoy it even if it's not your cup of tea then, larkpie. :)

Feel free to read my other story if this one isn't to your perticular tastes. There's a difference with those girls compared to the ones in this one that might give you a better read. Hopefully.

Reviewer: Franchise Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2017 3:13 PM Title: Fated meetings

This story is your own doing Sterben. And it was a great read, from begining to end. I look foward to seeing Pay it foward, from begining to end as well. :)



Author's Response:

;-;

 

Thank you for helping me. Thank you for everything...

Reviewer: Silver Stranger Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2017 10:05 PM Title: Fated meetings

I'm SUPER-happy to see the story go on!

And I think it becomes better and better. It's not a good giantess-related story - it's a great story as a story-story. Love the charicters: the "monsters" philosophy is good and I like to know where it's all going to.

Latest chapters are the best! And I would love to see the next one! *0* 



Author's Response: I'm glad your enjoying it even if the last few chapters have seem rather tame of GTS compared to the earlier chapters. Either way thank you for leaving me your thoughts. I'll try to have the next chapter up soon. It's proving harder to write then I thought sadly.

Reviewer: jessebona Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2017 4:12 AM Title: Fated meetings

So did they erase her memory of meeting them the first time or not? I assumed when they first said they had met her before that something bad happened and the twins wiped or changed her memory and she doesn't seem to react to any of it until the whole story is told. Look at me, questioning potential plot holes on GW lol.



Author's Response:

Lol XD

They had met her long ago, and learned a lot from her and wanted to eventually bring Claire into their world. But with her sincerity came her naivety. She wouldn't be ready to learn of  everything they had been doing. So they had planned on completing their plan before eventually bringing Claire into it, but they ran out of time...

Claire was reverting back to her old deppressed self because no one was there for her anymore. So, they stepped in. But they had to make her forget... so to not frighten her or change her irreversibly like they had with their friends. Their extremely cautious with Claire after all that had happened with their four friends. And Claire is the last one they'd want to mess with mentally.

I hope your reading this helps clear up any confusion. Or... possibly adds on a few other questions that i haven't answered yet...

:P

Reviewer: Diuin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 26 2017 2:07 PM Title: Fated meetings

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Author's Response:

Uhh... what?

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2017 12:28 PM Title: Fated meetings

OK so the only reason I haven't left a review lately is because I haven't read every chapter. The last one I read was when Lily revealed Claire her tragic past and you know I'm a big Lily fan ;). And the only reason I didn't finish reading was becuase I'm afraid to finish reading these awesome chapters so quickly lol I know it sounds weird but that's me personally. Please, please, please don't let a lack of reviews discourage you from writing because your story is sooo good. It's not just a fetish story but it has such dramatic depths to it invovling Claire and the girls.

Author's Response:

I appreciate you telling me this, but don't worry ^,^

The community stepped up and told me what they think of my work and honestly it's calmed my nerves tremendously. I'll keep posting chapters till the final words part!

Thank you for leaving me your thoughts, i'm glad you like Lily, she was a tricky girl to write about. :3

Reviewer: MadHatter Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2017 2:58 PM Title: Fated meetings

Hey don't lose faith. I'm not as vocal as I should be about good stories so I'll try to fix that in the future but I'm always looking for updates for this one lol



Author's Response:

Thank you for that MadHatter, this makes me feel a lot better. :)

I'll try to have a new chapter up soon.

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 10 2016 11:30 AM Title: Fated meetings

I rated five stars hope you got them cause my tablet is being dumb (it gives less stars when I select 5 for some strange reason), also thanks for recommending my story to Franchise. Keep up the good work cause this story definitely deserves five stars.

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2016 12:06 PM Title: Fated meetings

This is a really good story! When the Sophia said lily was at 25% I literally felt a chill go down my spine! lol! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much Nothingness. I appreciate your words of encouragement :)

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2016 9:03 PM Title: Fated meetings

I'm still reading too buddy! Great character development and the story is keeping me intrigued!!! Hope to see what comes next!

Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch Zbh :D I hope i'll have a new chapter soon to give to you guys!

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2016 4:43 PM Title: Fated meetings

I actually meant not done with Claire yet. I think the reason why Lily said she's like her will be another cause of sorrow for the poor worker.



Author's Response:

Ahh, well i can safely say without any spoiling, we are most certainly not done, her past has yet to be truly discovered and with the upcoming chapters you'll soon find out just why that is.

Reviewer: KindaEmbarassed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 6:36 PM Title: Fated meetings

This story is amazing...it reads more like a real novel than an erotica. I'm mostly here for action but I think anyone can see that this story is something special.

 

I loved a couple of the kinks you touched on,

 

Kai is best girl.



Author's Response:

Thank you KindaEmbarassed :)

I feel kind of embarassed myself xD

I'm glad to give a fulfilling story to you and everyone else. As a aspiring writer, thats all i can ever hope for.

Also happy to with the over all diversity. I wanted this story to speak to many, and i knew when I added Kai that would :3

Reviewer: zaneofbane Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2016 2:51 PM Title: Fated meetings

Really looking forward to some anal insertion from Kai



Author's Response:

Hmm, something to touch on :)

Reviewer: Silver Stranger Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2016 5:01 AM Title: Fated meetings

Just read it and... wow! Great story, realy!

I like the way you expand your charicters, and all of them have a very interesting personalities. Can't wait to see where it's all going and what twins are planning to do with Clair.

And... Is Kat was created as a reference to Taokaka? :3



Author's Response:

Actually i based her personality off Tao XD i'm surprised someone noticed. Also wanted to make her stand out, i have plans for her in the future as well. While she doesn't look like her one bit, i based that off a different image entirely. But yea, i wanted her to have that fun type of speech.

Reviewer: SheerForce Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2016 7:08 AM Title: Fated meetings

Awesome story :)

Author's Response:

Thank you SheerForce, that really means a lot to me :)

Reviewer: Niko224 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2016 1:51 PM Title: Fated meetings

This was an awesome story so far and very interesting and well done!!!!

I just wanted to know when the next chapter will be out because i am eager to read more! Thanks!



Author's Response:

I will try to finish it soon, i'm working on it as quick as I can. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 07 2016 8:25 AM Title: Fated meetings

Very nice story you've got here! I like Lily stuck up personality lol! Please continue writing.

Author's Response:

I will continue soon, just have to write a few more chapters first. I wrote all of them at once and broke them apart into seperate ones.

Reviewer: daftpunk Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2016 5:13 PM Title: Fated meetings

great story! Since you asked for input can i request a chapter of unaware interactions with May? the girls could prank her in various ways and she would be none the wiser with some vore and barefoot crush



Author's Response:

Oh don't you worry my friend, there will be unaware giantess play afoot, and yes i used that word purposefully.

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2016 3:03 AM Title: Fated meetings

It's starting to look really good, hope to see more soon.

Could you tell is which anime characters you had in mind for each girl?



Author's Response:

It wasn't so much one's i had in mind but ones i found to fit the role's i had in mind. I think these are the characters i based them off of but if there not the right one's I sorry. I don't watch a lot of anime, mostly main stream long ones.

The twin's i based Sophia & Alexis as are called, Matsmiya Yuumi & Matsumiya Yuuka.

Claire, Kat, and Kai were all based off different artist drawn pictures so i can't exactly say an anime because there not from one.

May was based off someone from something called, tachibana artemisia

And Lily (Lilith) was based off someone called ichinose sakura, also an artist drawn picture from what i can tell but she has a name none the less.

I found all the images i wanted to base these character's off of from GelBooru.com, in case you care to look for them yourself. the discriptions i gave of them should be enough to find them.

I hope that helps.

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2016 11:16 PM Title: Fated meetings

A very intressting first chapter and I felt really easy with reading into it. I am looking forward for a continouation. Perhaps it would be nice to add a description for CLaire, how she looks like (her bodily assets)

 

Keep writing, its great :)

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