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Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2016 3:47 AM Title: Kat toy

Good chapter, its nice to know more about Kat and see her have some fun in the end, the only thing I would point out is that I dont really think the title fits the chapter since Kat doesnt really uses her as a toy but thats just me nitpicking, everything else was pretty good.

Also I wonder about what Kat said that only the people she wanted could see her and how Claire saw her anyway. Hope to see more soon.



Author's Response:

I was some would catch onto that, i guess with time you might find out :)

Reviewer: newb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2016 4:41 PM Title: Kat toy

Wow!! What a chapter! Powerful insight into who Kat is, and the altruism of Claire.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it, i was worried the chapter might be to long.

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