Reviewer: LJin Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2016 4:55 PM Title: Rewarding good behaviour

From the bottom of my heart and soul, thank you so much for writing this story.

I thought I'd never find this fantasy of mine written; and casually before going to sleep I happen to find this one that is so well written and I can see and feel that truly has a lot of effort put on it. Ended up spending quite some hours reading. Still at the part after Kat and have more chapters, and even if you won't finish the whole story someday, I'll still be more than happy to had find it and be able to keep in my memories.

Love so much these ideas, discussions, thoughts and kinks that mess with beliefs, morals and dark themes. Lately been discovering about corruption kink (maybe I was corrupted, anyway). But, especially, that doesn't treat affection and love as something exclusive to '100% naive gentleness' as I like to say, because even 'Precious Little Demons' can have these feelings.

And by far, the biggest and most special thing for me, that I probably wouldn't keep reading if this wasn't present was Claire being a 'special one', loved and protected by all the impossibly powerful and superior girls. This isn't just a simple kink for me, more like truly mess with my feelings whenever I see or find something involving this. I love this feeling of helplessness and protection/safety/love at same time. How the twins and Kat say they won't hurt Claire, and she will be always safe, while still witnessing them treating others they believe that deserves, 'cruelly'. Might not believe me, but I am sincerely happy reading this. Also love this slowly corruption, that they can see what truly lies beneath the traumas, beliefs and morals; helping her to be sincerely happy together with them, and not against them because part of her unconscious mind and thoughts try to promptly lead her 'wrongly' at the first sight of every 'unacceptable' or 'cruel' act.

I loved this sense of utter fear, helplessness of all the things the twins and the others that received the gifts causes while reading; like Kat when 'snapped' and showed her little toys, when controlled Claire's body and actions. Brought plenty of fear and anxiety wishing for Claire to find a way to help her, to change her mind; not just selfishly trying to find a way to save herself. But to help Kat. Drama and tragedy is also keeps me so deeply fascinated and always ending up putting myself in the characters place, which sometimes make the reading quite overwhelming for me. Forcing me to take a rest. Poor Kat...

Thank you again, and wonderful work, you are very good in the dialogues and description.

Author's Response:

Wow... where, where to begin...

LJin, this is by far, the longest, and most sincere review, i have ever been previlaged to recieve. When i came back to check them tonight and i saw this long master piece my heart was a aflutter. Thank you, so, so much, thank you, for taking your valued time out of your day to review in such detail. There is no greater joy to a writer, or in my case an aspiring one then to get such thoughtful insight from my readers on my work  (TvT)

I can agree with you, a lot of feelings, as many as i can muster i put into this story. But the feeling that makes me the happiest is knowing others truly appreciate my mind... my corrupted mind xD. I don't plan on ending this story on a cliffhanger or just dropping it entirely I assure you. No, i came into this story knowing full well from start to finish it would need to be completed and even if it takes me weeks to try and get everything readable, (i have a lot of trouble with english) i will endever to keep it going till the final letter meets the paper.

I hope the emotions from here on out arn't to much for you, i promised this story when it began would be dark, and there will be many more emotional scenes to come, but i hope you stay and enjoy the ride all the same. It's a pleasure to write for you!