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Reviewer: Silver Stranger Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2016 1:49 AM Title: May-be this won't be so bad?

Weeeell, Claire had a little naughty fun with Kat and twins not so long ago, and now she call that guy a pervert ^^

Nice chapter by the way. Nice to see more of this story. And now I'm worry what will heppend when Kai or Lilith put thair hands on Clair Oo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Silver for taking your time to review :) I appreciate your thoughts on the matters at hand!

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2016 2:14 AM Title: May-be this won't be so bad?

Is nice to see a new chapter. Now getting to know more about May, it seems her situation isn't as tragic as Kat's but still pretty serious.

I liked the relationship Claire formed with May, and I'm a bit interested in how the twins would explain May what she was doing with that man.

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it Kentaryu :D I was begining to worry i made it to tame. I havent had a lot of reviews in my last couple chapters. But i plan on making it get better soon.

Reviewer: Dante123113 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2016 2:55 PM Title: May-be this won't be so bad?

Nice chapter! I'm very happy another chapter was added, I can't wait for more! However, I did find a few grammatical errors, but nothing too major. I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Aww i thought i nailed all those in when i re-read it :(

I'll try to make it cleaner next chapter, thank you for telling me!

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