[Report This]Date: July 01 2016 4:40 AM Title: A wager between friend's
I wasn't expecting a new chapter so soon, nice!
Now is time for my favorite girl, Kai. It seems the power that the twins gave her isn't useful only for defending againts strangers but also for "contributing to the twins". I'm intrigued by her behavior and hope to know soon the reason for it, also curious about her scent.
There's now the thing with Lily, it seems only the twin see her as a friend and maybe Kai, though I'm not really sure about the last. Also the twin's plan which is still a mistery is popping up more in the dialogue recently.
And it seems the twins had a "talk" with May about the ways shen handles the tinies, kind of amusing to see them flustered, even if just a bit.
Anyway, good chapter, really looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response:
Thank you KentaRyu, your reviews are always amazing to read and make me happy to write quicker! I'll try to have the next chapter up post haste!
Date: June 30 2016 5:56 PM Title: A wager between friend's
They're taking the law into there own hands, and they don't see a problem with them because they're killing "monsters". But who are they to decide that? Someone stronger than them could judge them as a "monster" and just as easily dispose of them. Instead of being Judge, Jury, and Executioner, they should be Doctor, Therapist, and Teacher. For all there talk of morality, they need a big dose of humility and empathy. I do hope karma catches up to them.
Oh, and for some reason, the twins just remind me of those creepy kids from Akira.
Author's Response:
Hmm, where are the line's drawn for morality and civility? Perhaps your right, or perhaps there's a bigger picture that has yet to be revealed. Thank your for your review, it was intresting to see such a strong opinion such as yours.
[Report This]Date: June 30 2016 1:41 PM Title: A wager between friend's
Dang! Beautiful chapter!
Lots of foreshadowing, and tension, in this one. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response:
Thank you Dante :D
I'll try to please!