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Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2016 11:38 PM Title: Kat fight,

i just love this story.I love kat, her story being my fav.looking forward to what happens next.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review Afroking :) Kat was a personal favorite of mine as well, not that I don't enjoy all the girls mind you :3

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2016 10:57 PM Title: Kat fight,

I have fewer time to post my thoughts lately with classes, life and such, especially now with each wonderful chapter that play with my feelings in such a way and I have more to think about.

Reading a story is like offering ourselves to the author, to the world they create, and allowing him/her to do whatever they want with us. It's like a hidden agreement. And this is the most wonderful thing that can happen, the unknow, to not expect things to happen, often never be prepared and our feelings not go as we expect. The surprise. That moment I get myself suddenly crying because of reasons. It's not our world. We're living the world you created. Playing with our emotions is the most amazing thing to feel, and why we enjoy so much stories that managed to do this and finds a special place in our mind.

All I can say is that this story is one of the few things that make my month happier, and whenever I have free time, I get myself thinking about it.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your words LJin. A feelings as great as that comes from writing for others as well. Having our own little world, just ready to be explored. Hidden things only we can foresee, but yet others never stop to try and see for themselves. When we know we can make people stop and really question whats going on around them. To have them wonder why this is that, or that is this. Its the little details that throw people off that truly cause me enjoyment ^,^ And i hope i'll be able to keep this up just a bit longer, until the final scene drops, and the story, comes to a fold. A appreciate you taking time out of your busy day to review, so thank you once again :)

 

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2016 1:21 AM Title: Kat fight,

This was a relaxing chapter, compared to the last ones, not that there's anything bad with it, I think it's good to have some peace after the storm.

I'm happy to see that Lily is starting to get more control over herself and some calm, hopefully is just the start of the road for a more peaceful life. She also was adorable in this chapter, couldn't avoid being charmed by the little one.

Kat too was a nice surprise in here, she's also making some progress on her own, being able to befriend Lily like that. The two of the make a really cute and funny duo. Is also nice that she was able to see Claire now, should've been a huge relief for her after their last encounter and knowing that the '´pretty lady' was going to spend the night with Lily.

And of course the last scene with the shrinking was adorable, surely Claire is getting to enjoy this more since there's not imminent danger for now.

Looking forward to the next one, the questions about Claire and her past keep piling up and that just makes me more interested.



Author's Response:

I'm glad i can keep you intrigued KentaRyu, things will seem to clear in the upcoming chapters but i hope for now you'll be patiant with me xD

Once again thank your for your review, it means the world to me to know your thoughts on the events going on.  :)

Reviewer: MadHatter Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2016 12:23 PM Title: Kat fight,

hey you haven't lost me as a fan lol. anytime I see an update for this one I smile. the Conext and character development has been so good and I am just here for the story at this point and that's crazy for a site like this lol



Author's Response:

You have no idea how much that means to me :) I'm glad i can give you something you can enjoy and i hope i'll be able to keep at it until the very end ^,^

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