[Report This]Date: October 28 2016 11:24 PM Title: The truth about trust...
Wonderful as always. Hope I'll be able to share my thoughts soon, for everything I've read. Lily and Kat become two of my dearests.
And I feel there will be more to Claire, things she isn't even aware. And I have an unease feeling about this. If so, I'm glad everyone is together to be with her, as much as Claire was with them at the moments they needed most.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the review, thank you :)
Claires story isn't quite over, only just coming to light now...
Date: October 25 2016 11:23 AM Title: The truth about trust...
I can't speak for anyone else; but the way I read the stories on this site is to copy them over on my computer to read later. Sometimes I forget to comment. The reason I copy the stories over is because I find the text formating on this site to be a bit harsh to read; where as on Word I can edit things to a format I more comfortable with.
I started your story months ago and really liked it. Since then I've simply been copying chapters over to read once a bunch are done. As of this chapter it works out to 226 pages with the font and text size I use on Word. That makes for a much more fulfilling read rather than the constant cliff-hanger style on this site.
I just wanted you to know that lack of feedback doesn't necessarily mean lack of interest and enjoyment. Keep up the great work!!!
Author's Response:
Your words calm me, thank you for that :)
My greatest concern is always if people won't enjoy my story. I want to make people happy so i try my best to format them properly, but i guess you have a point. This site has had some issues when i tried posting directly from word, so i always have to copy and paste and that gets messy.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2016 3:47 AM Title: The truth about trust...
New chapter, nice.
I found the start quite cute, with the drooling scene and Kat and Lily's interaction.
Lily's warning gave me a bit to think about so I was relieved to confirm again at the next scene that the twin's love for Claire is completely real. I still got no idea about their plan nor at what happened before the story began but as long as their care for the worker is real I think everything will work out, somehow.
I'm also happy to see that the twins gave the first step in the path to reconciliate with Lily. It might take a while but the hope is still there.
And not much to say about the final part. The little talk with Claire and the other three girls was heartwarming, and with everyone reunited again, it's time to reveal a bit more of the truth, looking forward to that.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it KentaRyu, and i will confirm, the Twins do in fact love Claire, that wasnt my intention of misguiding people with Lily's words :(