[Report This]Date: February 23 2017 2:04 PM Title: What We'll Do...
Again, that was fast. It hasn't really been long since my last message.
For the twins even after getting all that knowledge to get to experience the human narute again, and see that that kind of behavior isn't just a limited case like with his father but a most frequent thing than we would like it to be should be quite shocking, of course it would make them doubt their effort. Though it's admirable that they still wanted to follow with their objective, even if not by the best means.
It was also quite interesting story to see the first interaction between the twins and Claire, is was really eager while reading. Sadly it wasn't in the best moment for them. Or maybe it was? Since it seems that'll open a oportunity for them to interact much more than they would on a regular situation.
The part in which Claire thought they finally would talk to her, when they were just leaving, that was quite sad for me.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
the World on the outside can be shiny and beautiful but when you see the hidden parts beneath it can get ugly. I was hoping this chapter displayed that, and showed that the twins weren't above playing by thier rules... even if it meant stopping the Monsters. As for claire coming int, it was a fateful moment which i hope i displayed properly. I'm glad you liked it and i'm working on the next chapter now. I hope to see what you think on the next one. KentaRyu!
[Report This]Date: February 21 2017 11:04 PM Title: What We'll Do...
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You know what, now's as good a time as any to say this. So I'll retire from 4 years of lurking and just come out and say it.
This is my absolute favorite story I've read on this site.
It's not in competition for the most sexually pleasurable, inventive shrinking scenario, or polished story (and I mean that in the best possible way; your talent is abundantly clear, and with a bit more attention to grammatical errors and sentence structure, your story could match the technical level of polish of some of the site's greatest classics). But regardless of all of those, it's still the best story I've read throughout my stay on the site, for one simple reason.
This story is positively emotionally charged. Every chapter I read strikes me so deeply on the inside, filling me with genuine warmth or sadness depending on its content. Even the sentences that are a tad confusing bleed a strong sense of emotion through them, and it's abundantly clear just how much thought you've put into developing them. I can't remember the last time I've felt so much for fictional characters as I have for Claire and the twins, and their plight has developed them into becoming so inspiring, likable, and, above all, human. Ironically, you've done a masterful job at making two superhuman, omniscient girls extremely understandable and natural, something I never would have believed was possible prior to reading this.
So, I wanted to say thanks. Thanks for writing a story warmer and more uplifting than almost any I've ever seen. Thanks for inspiring me to look within myself and try to be a genuinely better person, and a responsible, thoughtful adult as well. And thanks for convincing me to finally write a review on this site, because I'm always elated to see a new chapter on the Most Recent page.
I'll stop gushing now. But I just wanted to let you know how much reading Precious Little Demons has meant to me, and I sincerely look forward to reading all future chapters. You have a work of art here.
Author's Response:
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I, I don't honestly know how to respond to this...
You've put so much thought into this review, and your words... i'm honestly tearing up. T^T
It brings me great joy, and pride to know I can make you emotive and stir your feelings like this. Thats all i've ever wanted when i made this story. And i'm hoping i'll be able to keep those feelings going till the final words are written, and the story reaches its climax, as sad as that will be for me.
Saying thank you in return might not seem like much, i say it to everyone who reviews for me, but i mean it none the less each time i say it. When someone takes their precious time to tell me what they think, and give me that time, it makes me feel revered by them. So i'll say it again, Thank you. Thank you so much for telling me this. This, is one of the most sincere responce's i've ever gotten from this site, and it's really struck a cord in me.
I'm happy to be writing here, because it's people like you, who make me proud to be a member of this community.
Thank you, Hyperian.
Date: February 21 2017 10:03 AM Title: What We'll Do...
Oooo! Great chapter! Another long one to enjoy. I was wondering when Claire's and the Twin's stories would finally intertwine and I love the way they did. The interaction between them in the final few moments gave me chills. I can't wait for the next one! :3
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it MarsyMan. A simple moment, but it was enough to throw the twins off :P
Thank you for reviewing, i'll try to have another chapter up when i can.