[Report This]Date: December 21 2020 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey Darien Fawkes, your story has finally made me decide to make an account on this website so I can leave a review. The world building in this story was great and its surprising since its on a giantess fanfiction website. The characters in this story acts like how they supposed to and are very realistic each having a sense of back story making it amazing to follow them throughout the story. The twist was something I almost expected, but didn't see until the chapter before. Anyways this is such a great story, with a well written plot, and amazing depth with the characters. I do hope you continue this story and make it into some sort of series. Maybe continue with Annallya's story what happens after, or writing what happened to someome? (The bandit group, the family Annallya ran into, or the titan Gaelin met in prison) Anyways hopefully you see this, and continue writing this story since this is one of the best stories on this website. Seriously this could be a book with how well written this story was.
Author's Response:
First off, sorry for how long it's taken me to give a response. I haven't been on the site much these days. Second, that's one of the highest honors I've ever been give. Someone making an account just to give a review on one of my stories, so I can't thank you enough. I especially want to thank you for saying it could be a book, because that's all I've ever wanted to do is write one. I'm sorry to say that I can't make any promises on writing a sequel. I want to, but I can't commit to it unless I have the ideas necessary to make it better than this one. Realistically, compared to a lot of the other stories on this site I've read, I don't think it's all that special or grand or exciting, but it's without a doubt the best thing I've personally ever created. So I don't want to make any promises to anyone unless I have the material to make something at least as good as this.
But thank you for liking it so much. That really means a lot.
Date: September 16 2018 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
i hope you make a sequel to this story, it would be interesting if her friend finds her and finds out that all she knows of human society was wrong
Date: August 17 2018 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you gtstory, i did get your mail and wish to thank you for your finding :)
In any case Darien, i hope you get some rest for now and hope see some more writing in the future when the time is right :D
Author's Response:
You got it, bro. I plan on taking some time to let new ideas cultivate. Soon as I got something fleshed out that I can really go somewhere with, I'll be back on the site typing. I'll see you then
Date: August 14 2018 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Welcome, thanks for the good read ^^
Date: August 13 2018 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very true. War doesn't determine who is right, only who is left. (I don't remember the author of the quote)
Author's Response:
how true that is. And thank you for reading and commenting so often on my story
Date: August 13 2018 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
your stories are the best on this site, would you consider something like A New Perspective with more intimate interaction? I absolutely love your themes and writing style
Author's Response:
hahaha, thank you. I don't consider my stories to be the best on this site by a long shot. But I do think that this is my best one so far. But thank you so much for liking them, it honestly means the world to hear that from you guys. Maybe I'll write something like you've described. It all depends on what ideas come into my head
Date: August 13 2018 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, guess I got the wrong impression.
Author's Response:
it's like the Whistler said at the end of his story. The people don't win by waging wars. They win by living.
Date: August 13 2018 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
a great ending to a great story.
Author's Response:
thank you for being a great commenter on this story smoki1020
Date: August 12 2018 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
great to see a definitive conclusion to this story, it feels like you have really comeinto your own as an author with this story
Author's Response:
I like to think so as well. Thank you for reading and saying so much about my story these past months HABERZphantom
Date: August 10 2018 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've noticed lately that a lot of the best story-telling, in books or even in song, has a lot to do with what the author/lyricist doesn't put in. I think thats yet another seemingly ongoing sign of your skill as a wordsmith. You sure you don't do this professionally? If you don't its fine, I'm just saying you could make real $ with your skills.
Date: August 10 2018 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
That's a fair point, I guess I'm just curious because it hasn't been explicitedly stated that someone has performed a spell, or that there are other traditionally magic beings such as fae or witches/warlocks etc.
You've kept this story excellently realistic, considering the nature of macrophilia, which is quite an accomplishment IMHO, its been very believable. Your writing, realistic or fantastical, is quite a pleasure to read.
Author's Response:
that's true. As you've seen before, I like to keep a few things vague for when I want something to pop up later. Thank you very much for the compliment on my writing. I can't tell you what it means to know that my story has been a pleasure to read
Date: August 09 2018 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I feel like the story’s going to end soon, and that makes me sad...
so... sequel?
Date: August 04 2018 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great! Reading this gave me such a clear image in my head that I could form a movie in my head! You also have a knack for writting fight scenes.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I also imagine fighting scenes portrayed like a movie in my head. I just do my best to describe it as clearly as I can. I'm happy to know that I pulled it off
Date: July 28 2018 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing Chapter! Amazing Speech. Can't wait for next!
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks for liking the speech. I was afraid it would be a little too cliche as far as fantasy novels go. I'll get right to work on the next chapter
Date: July 19 2018 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
No problem at all, just being honest.
Date: July 19 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
To be frank, earlier in the story I had concerns that gaelin would be a fairly bland mary-sue type character when he was first introduced but this chapter genuinely makes him sympathetic and relatable while also providing some insight into his mindset
I wish I could give you an award or something
Author's Response:
Yeah I get it. The last thing I wanted to write was a Mary Sue character, and differentiate him from Andrill, the first character I introduced. Though Gaelin was always intended to be the main male protagonist, and Annallya obviously the main female protag. I wanted him to be flawed, so I made him an alcoholic, who's also done a lot of things that he regrets. I'll expand a little on what happened to him between his village being destroyed and where he is now. If not in this story, then maybe in a future instalment
Date: July 14 2018 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
I figured there would be no trial, that was just me hoping that the humans would take the moral high road and that the Queen/other Titan's would be humbled by humanity in a poetic and merciful way.
My idea being based on the quote "to err is human, to forgive divine".
Date: July 14 2018 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Finally the horrible truth is reveled!! you wrote well the Annallya's emotions this is very good chapter. but I need help to understand the last part of ch. with Camp and the spy. Can you help me?
Author's Response:
That part will make more sense later on in the story. You'll see
Date: July 13 2018 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
“You . . . kidnap humans . . . to mate with them?”
Called it.
Author's Response:
*high five*
Date: July 02 2018 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
some fairly good writing in terms of the fight scene, good job
Author's Response:
thank you very much