[Report This]Date: June 13 2016 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yes! Another chapter! I love how the story is going, and only wish the updates would be faster :) But I forgive you. Again, really nice to see a well-paced, thought-out story. Looking forward to reading more (especially Annallya, of course...)
Date: June 04 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great to see you back, after such a long time away! I love this chapter, its good to see the characters you introduced coming together. I think after this point, it will be a lot of arguing between our heroine and the other Titans and even leading to her visiting an actual human village.
[Report This]Date: March 23 2016 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow... I think I've come across a great story. Keep up the good work, the evolution of the characters, their relationships, and their understandings of each other. Thoroughly enjoyable! Can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your comment. I've tried my best to pace it out evenly and I'm glad to see that its working.
Date: March 22 2016 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like this, Galen wasn't the overly harsh man I thought he be ; I thought he might go a bit further, try to kill Annallya but no, he let her go with a very serious threat. Good job.
Author's Response:
And he had some very good reasons for that. Nothing done in this story is going to happen without a good reason. At least, that's what I'm aiming for.
Date: March 20 2016 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
I agree with Pixis ,it does seem odd. Good chapter and as always, happy to see you update! Your stories are amazing.
Author's Response:
I might explain that in the story but incase I can't find a good way to work it in I'll explain this one important aspect. To put it into perspective, look back on the history of slavery in the world, especially the US. Humans were enslaved, beaten, and killed by other humans who could comunicate perfectly with them. All around the world at different points of history this has been shown. So it's not too hard to imagine when you think of it that way, though it does become a great deal more sad.
Thank you for reading Nostory, as always.
[Report This]Date: March 17 2016 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! This is such a great story! Hope to see more updates.
Author's Response:
I'll be updating as soon as I can. School and work prevent me from binge writing like I wish I could. But somehow I progress. Until then thank you for your patience and thank you so much for reading and commenting!
Date: February 28 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Alright, I'll stick to commenting on the story and its overall quality.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2016 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Your stories are alway great. So ill be here till the end.
Date: February 24 2016 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
A strong start. I'm intrigued. While there was not much interaction with the Titans yet, the description was very exciting and well done. I'm interested to see where this goes.
Author's Response:
Well my aim was to set a mood with this chapter, not do anything yet. Glad to hear it had the desired effect. And thank you for reading and commenting.
Date: February 24 2016 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can tell this will be a grimmer tale than your other ones. I'm used to lighter stories from you but as long as it is good, I have no issues.
I'm going to guess that Tayell is our hero and he will be the offering. Since he wasn't around the Titans will destroy his village and set him on the quest. The Titan he'll meet may be one of those who did destroy the village and is disturbed by what they did.
Will you be alternating between this and The Year We Went to War?
Author's Response:
Very astute observation.
I'm not going to tell how much of your prediction you were right about, I'll keep you guessing.
And yes, I will be alternating between this and The Year We Went to War, but it won't always be back and forth. Sometimes I'll crank out two chapters in a row of one story, or another. Depends on where inspiration strikes. And as always, thank you for reading.
Date: February 24 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interested to see where this goes. I like the premise.
Author's Response:
Why thank you.
[Report This]Date: February 24 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Pretty good start although the chapter was a little too short for my tastes. And the giantesses didn't really do anything yet, they just kinda walked up and decreed something and then we cut to our hero running away through a forest for some reason. Not much info yet, not exactly the most exciting opening chapter but hey, I'm a fan of your other works so I've no doubt this will be a good one!
Author's Response:
Yeah I know. I have a lot of ideas for how I want this story to progress, however I have to build up to that first, can't rush it. This was just an opening chapter to set the mood.