Date: June 12 2018 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hey, I just binge read my way through this story for the first time. I love it so much. I've said this in a review on a different story before, but I'll say it again here: I come to this site for my fetish, but honestly the stories that leave the biggest impression on me and leave me coming back for more are stories like yours. Your story really does feel to me like I'm reading a book, it's so good. I love the world you've built and the characters within it. I care about them and their troubles. I passed by this story so many times on the most recent page looking for more sexual stuff, but I'm so glad I finally read it! (I'm also kinda glad I waited so long so I had such a large amount of story to burn through. I die waiting for every update, as I'm going to die waiting for each update to this story as I will have to from now on).
Do answer your question, the reveal at least had a big impact on me because I only read the chapter introducing the guardians this morning. I didn't see it coming that Gaelin was a guardian at all. In fact I was so afraid last chapter that he was just going to sacrifice himself to let the others go. After he cut off the Titan's finger, I thought for sure he was going to be killed.
Though I do fear for what happens next. I always fear the transition in these types of stories from the giantess and tiny living together in relative peace to the moment that their peace is violently torn away from them in some manner or another. And that time has finally come for this story. I do hold hope for when Gaelin and Annallya might be able to find peace once more. But it seems this story has quite a lot more to tell, and I'm excited to read all that's in store.
Onto more plot related details. Though Gaelin is true to his word, I hold an extremely large amout of doubt that the same can be said for Rhaolin. I fear that the moment they have Gaelin, they'll just reneg and kidnap the humans again anyway.
All in all though, keep up the good work! I think your story might just be the most well-written thing I've read on this site, and I'm very excited to see what the future will hold.
Author's Response:
Wow, I really appreciate you opening up my story and binge reading it in one go, despite the fact that it's a lot to get through. I'm honored that you feel that it does read like a book, and that you really love the characters and world that I've built. As far as the chapters go, I'm pumping them out faster now, but not instantly.
I'm glad that the reveal had an impact on you. As far as what comes next, well . . . shit happens. Oh, and your fears are quite justified.
Thank you so much for all that you've said. I'll be sure to get to work on the next chapters so that everyone won't have to wait long.
Date: June 12 2018 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
Amazing chepter. Anallya's secret is discovered and we finally get to see the Titan's wikness (I knew they can be defeated somehow). Geline is such a badass, I really wish to see him unlish his full powers when the time is right.
Author's Response:
unleash his full powers? I hate giving things away when there's suspence hanging in the air, but Gaelin doesn't have any actual powers. The sword he carries was fordged by mages, making it capable of cutting through almost anything. No actual powers, though.
Date: June 12 2018 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
ive been enjoying the story and saw the new chapters. lot to read thru but good. galin seems to have some tricks up his sleeve!
Author's Response:
yeah it is, but I'm trying to make it as much like a book as I can. Hoping that the quality balances out the length of the chapters
[Report This]Date: June 11 2018 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow, another amazing chapter! I sent an email to you just now (please let me know if you got it or not) so I'll keep this brief.. but what a great chapter, all the way around. I loved how Annallya was able to see the love humans have, and stand up to her mother. I also liked how Annallya (though she certainly doesn't need it for her kindness and compassion) might have to experience being smaller than those around her for the first time in her life (as usually she's either been larger, or the size of those around her). And of course, there's Gaelin (with his history revealed), standing up to the Titans.
These are great characters.
And the chapters just keep getting better (something I thought would be impossible, given how good they've been from the beginning)!
Author's Response:
Just letting you know I replied to your email. Thanks for all of the comments gtstory
Date: June 11 2018 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
I remembered the previous chapters. I do hope something very appropriate happens to the Titans, not an execution, that would only solidify their beliefs in human savagery, perhaps a trial by jury, sentencing, Annalyia's mother to live as a human perhaps.
Author's Response:
I won't allude to whether or not anything happens to the Titans. But I'm thankful you like my story enough to remember it, and comment. I'll go get started on Chapter 17
Date: June 11 2018 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
I remembered the previous chapters. I do hope something very appropriate happens to the Titans, not an execution, that would only solidify their beliefs in human savagery, perhaps a trial by jury.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2018 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
Shocker! But it makes sense, if the humans were to have any chance it would have to be some previously established power. Its probably the easiest route the story could take and keep suspension of disbelief. Great stuff but why would Gaelin surrender? Does he not have the power to kill the titans? Maybe he by himself isnt enough? Holy crap! To say im looking forward to the next one would be an understatement!
Author's Response:
As long as the reveal hit in the way that it was supposed to, I'm glad. Thank you for the comment, I'll be sure to get working on the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2018 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
Shocker! But it makes sense, if the humans were to have any chance it would have to be some previously established power. Its probably the easiest route the story could take and keep suspension of disbelief. Great stuff but why would Gaelin surrender? Does he not have the power to kill the titans? Maybe he by himself isnt enough? Holy crap! To say im looking forward to the next one would be an understatement!
Date: June 10 2018 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
Gaelin surrendering would still leave the village vulnerable to attack, I hope he and Annallya can work something out.
Author's Response:
oh don't worry, I didn't overlook that. I just decided to leave that for the next chapter, so as to end on a dramatic note. By the way, Nostory, did you read the comment that I left under Downtrodden?