[Report This]Date: January 14 2017 1:10 AM Title: An Underestimated Threat
Good job, reading this made my heart pump, both in excitement and fear of the situation. Hope to see more.
Date: September 14 2016 7:37 PM Title: An Underestimated Threat
Nice. Chapter 1. Good setup.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks Diesel for the support :) It's very appreciated
Date: April 04 2016 9:21 AM Title: An Underestimated Threat
I love where this is going, any more coming soon?
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 7:46 AM Title: An Underestimated Threat
Haven't read the story yet, but I'm giving it 5 stars because I think the other guy meant to do so
Author's Response: Haha Thanks for that SheerForce. He seemed to like it indeed :) I hope you like the story
Date: February 26 2016 11:42 AM Title: An Underestimated Threat
Wow, great start. Your POV voice has really vivid emotion.
Author's Response: Thanks realRS. It is nice to hear. It's funny I was reading Erica's House just before beginning to write :)
Date: February 26 2016 8:37 AM Title: An Underestimated Threat
Hey I really like how your story begins and how you focus on small details. I'd really prefer the chapters to be a bit longer since it doesnt even take me half a minute to read through them :)
Great work hope you continue with it^^
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I try to make it look realistic. I think there are too many stories with incoherences everywhere. Even videos are sometimes too incoherent. Concerning lenght: I prefer to upload often and regularly than one long chapter every months. I hope you'll continue to like it.
Date: February 26 2016 4:38 AM Title: An Underestimated Threat
Interesting set up. I like these kind of stories. I always find it interesting what the writer thinks would happen if such a event occured in real life.
Author's Response: Thanks you Barrowman for you review. It is a scenario that I always loved. I already wrote about it in French but it's my first time in English. I hope you'll like it.
Date: February 26 2016 3:12 AM Title: An Underestimated Threat
A very good set up. Usually a lot of first chapters are not the best. You set everything up well, made it logical. Looking forward to more. Do you have more chapters written or are you writing as you go along?
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response: Hi Diesel,
Thanks for your feedback. Very nice of you. I have a second chapter that I'll upload today. I have an idea of where I want to go but nothing written yet.