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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2016 4:37 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places

I'm still wondering.

Will there be a tiny named Tom? Or is it too late for him now?

I would love to see him in the hands of Mrs. May.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2016 5:03 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places

D W, glad you liked the mummify idea. I saw it only in a few stories and wish it could be a widespread topic.

I once wrote a small story on another site about this one wife who has been living with her shrunken husband, and couldn't bear to see his face, so she put this rubber suit on him which makes him immobile. One day, some random shrunken guy tries to steal from the house that the couple lives, and he decides to hide in the suit. He takes out the husband already in it, and puts the suit on himself. Then, the wife comes back and decides to play with her husband whom she thinks is in the suit. Little does she know that it's some random guy instead.

I saw another story where some teen girl regularly humped her teddy bear and some guy decided to hide in it, and he had to suffer as the girl, without her knowledge, was putting her weight on him in the process.

A classic one that I like, is one woman finds a tiny but she already has one. So she mummified him and puts a bow on him and gives him to her sexy friend and tells her that's it's a sex toy which moves and squirms. The friend uses it without realizing that it's a real person.

Back to this story. I like your idea of Mrs. May putting the tinies in different spots. Now since there are 3, I guess I have to predict soemthing for 3 tinies.

Perhaps, Mrs. May returns and finds Josh and the girl fighting and decides that they each ride in her bra. Then she smiles down at Julian and says, "I have had my eye on you for a while, young man. I think I've got a special place for you" as she puts him in the front of her panties. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2016 10:33 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places

@DW,

Personally, I prefer to focus on Julian alone and without the girl. If I was Julian, I would want Mrs. May to focus on just me, and for every moan or sound she makes, I know it would be becuase of me.

To me, it's like sharing your dream girl with some other person. It would feel weird to be pleasing someone while another person is also pleasing them. I see Mrs. May as that dream girl and I picture myself as Julian.

You say that you want the girl to stay in the panty, and for me, I hope that Julian stays in the panty. I don't mind if the girl is in Mrs. May's asshole becuase it would feel like the girl is gone anyway. Lol. I just hope Julian gets the focus he dreamed of when he first walked into Mrs. May's room.

I think the girl was just a way for Julian to know what he would be getting into if he got caught with Mrs. May. Who knows? Maybe the girl is gone by now and that's why Mrs. May decided to keep Julian this time.

Author's Response:

Things are about to get interesting in Mrs. May's room. If you didn't like the idea of two, well then, three is even worse, sorry, :-/ 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2016 2:41 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places

@DW

I know right. Finally. I have been praying to the goddesses of giantess world and my prayers seem to have been answered. They have given Duggernaut the key to destiny for Julian and the time has come.

You do bring up a good point. I forgot about Mrs. May's female companion. Hopefully, this tiny would be discarded so Julian can take her place. Or, Mrs. May will let the lady rest while she plays with Julian. I just think that after she plays with Julian, she will prefer Julian over the girl.

I hope Mrs. May keeps Julian in the front of her panties. Maybe even tie him up while he is in there so he can't escape. Oh boy, I feel like a kid opening presents. I'm excited!

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2016 1:59 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

....FUCK....  "*.*"



Author's Response:

Quite possibly, it does have a very ominous feel. 

Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2016 8:15 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Like Feyd-Rautha Harkonnen in Dune, I wish Duggernaut would say about Julian....

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aNqpdggBfgY



Author's Response:

My response to that would be michael Wincott's dialogue at 1:27

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gDwlbuyDPfk

:)

Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2016 7:41 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

I don't have a major problem keeping Julian as long as something shitty happens to him.

Having to read the antics of this asshole....  When I imagine being imprisoned with such a dick, it's like being raped with a flail enema.

 

A flail



Author's Response:

I think being imprisoned in someone's ass, not matter achingly cute would constiutue a shitty situation, just saying :)

Reviewer: AprilJoinerWeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 12:28 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Julian is a very interesting character, I'm with TomSpeedy, I think killing him is a bit harsh. This isn't a pack of hyenas. The Julian character is supposed to inflict these types of emotions you're feeling. It makes the story much more dynamic. Will Julian escape unscathed? Probably not :) and that is why I'm super excited for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

You're right, Julian is chaotic, lewd, uncouth, and unfiltered. He was designed and written to be antagonist. He says what he feels, and fuck the consequences. The great karmic wheel may have something yet in store for him.

Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2016 8:18 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

He's a douche. This is reality....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QwnUrmA8Nbw
Gork, the hyena queen, has been a total douche and threatening the existence of her clan with her selfish behavior. The others take out You can watch around 19:00 minutes. By 22:00, Gork is maimed and by 25 minutes, we see what happens. This is mammalian behavior in a social order and that includes humans.

Upon Bohdi's healing, together, we would have killed Julian.

Author's Response:

Things may change given the fact Faith is not acquiring more tinies on a regular basis and who can say how Julian will be tolerated over a longer period of time before someone attempts to put him in his place. Maybe they could just freeze him out...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2016 8:12 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

@vxrx,

Kill Julian? That might be a bit too far.

I see the torture that he receives is a punishment for him being so cocky. Faith putting him in the toilet, in her butt. Not to mention what Mrs. May will do to him.

Julian's personality is what makes him unique. While Josh, Carver and Bodhi are concerned for the group's well being, Julian offers insight that only someone as selfish as he can see.

Remember when they rescued Bodhi? Josh realized that Julian was right and they probably should have left him. Faith said that Bodhi was a cutie and that makes Josh and Julian more expendable.

Have you considered that since Julian was stuck being Faith's toy the longest that he now has been affected to the point of pure survival instincts and his prolonged confinement has left him angry at the only ones he can and that are the other prisoners?

My point is we don't know Julian's whole story and he may have been changed by this whole experience of being shrunk. Julian is probably desperate to be restored and is probably considering death as a possibility since he knows that his life sucks.

We can see through Josh that Julian is stubborn and argues a lot, but from what I see, Julian survived all this time so his decisions should be considered.

Not to mention there was one chapter that was ridiculously funny becuase of Julian. He is important becuase he is different. His "alpha male" behavior is probably what kept him alive.

In a world where death can happen at any moment and you are held hostage by a giantess family, it's a game of survival. It's sexy and deadly, but Julian knows how to play this game, regardless of what he does or says, he is alive and he should not be killed.

Author's Response:

There seems to be a grain of truth in the things Julian says, though his method of delivery is certainly not conducive to relationship building. Julian is more of an 'OMEGA' male, while Josh fits the more tradition archetype of alpha. Besides, we know you just want to see Mrs. May have her way with him, :)

Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2016 7:41 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Please kill Julian ASAP. I don't care how. He's a douchebag asshole of literally unbelievable magnitude.

Sometimes in fiction, characters are so unsavory that members of the audience either begin to lose suspension of disbelief or abandon the work entirely because the real world is filled with enough unpleasant people that the audience member thinks "Why should I waste my free time exposing myself to another one?"

Julian is such a character. In the real world, an alpha douchebag like that would either get the shit kicked out of him to take him down a few pegs or outright murdered. (*) If I was another guy in this story, while Julian was being used as a buttplug, I'd be conspiring with the others to take him out.

(*) This sort of thing happens in reality too. I've seen on PBS an alpha female hyena who was a real douchebag. The other hyenas got fed up with her and beat her to within an inch of her life and she became the lowest in social order.

So, either please kill Julian or cause something to happen to him so he reassesses being the alpha douche he is.

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to write a review and share your feelings about the story. Yes, Julian is an asshole and I've tried to shed some light on some of his character flaws. While I can't defend what an absolute tool he's been to other characters, he is has been trapped here longer than any of the others and has constructed defense mechanism to push others away, all the while desperately afraid of being al;one. I too have seen usurpation of misplaced authroity and social upheaval both in the animal kingdom and obviously through human history. Rest assured, there will be some comeuppance for our disagreeable mouthpiece.

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2016 8:49 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Thank you.



Author's Response:

You're welcome, I'm planning for another full Julie chaprter in the next little bit.

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 9:29 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Just read this story in one go.

I must say, it's brilliant! Perfectly paced, and you do those characters of yours so well. I concur with squashed123 too, I'd love to see more of Julie, though I think you'd have to change the rating of the story from R to X for that to happen, lol! (Can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter with Mrs May and Julie)

I have yet to read Tom's story, but this one is simple enough that one day, I'd really love to try and render this one out. Might come out really nice!



Author's Response:

More Julie coming. I'm glad you find this story engaging and thanks for the props! Tom's Story is taking on a life of its own...

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2016 9:43 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Great story, though I wish the chapters were longer.

You have built great characters that stay true to their personality, which is hard to do. This way, it gets quite personal with all of them and that is simply an amazing achievement. I really like the way Julian acts, his boldness, practicality and cynicism never fail to make the corners of my mouth turn upward. I yearn to be able to write a character like him, kudos!

What you did with mother May was just perfect. Here you are, little slave, but instead of falling into depression or trying to save yourself, I'll just make you yearn for another giant captor instead of the one or two you already have. Brilliant!

You get around telling lot's of backstory like a pro. It never feels like it's needed at all, and that keeps the story the way it's supposed to be. You're just a really great author.

There's one think I hope for in the future though, and that is more Julie. Her insane, over-the-top cruelty is exciting. Perhaps you'll let us sneak a peak into her mind at some point? 

Consider me on the edge of my seat, begging for more.

Best regards.



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts. There have been a few reviews extolling Julian and he is super fun to write for. Funny you should mention julie because there is more of her in the next chapter or two. Again thanks for such praise I hope I am worthy of it as this tale moves along. Please enjoy!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2016 9:25 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

"a well trained panty prisoner for the mom, 24/7 mostly solitary confinement with no chance of parole, ever." -D W

^That is like the sexiest thing I read all week! That would be a dream come true!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2016 9:20 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

@D W,

Don't get me wrong. Faith is still a sexy girl. In fact, she is probably a 9/10. It's just that the mom seems to be out of this world hot. Like 21/10. In other stories from Duggernaut, I see many similar giantesses that resemble Faith, but Mrs. May. My goodness, she is something special.

For the tiny in her panties, maybe that's her favorite. She didn't tie him like what Julie did with her tiny. I think Mrs. May has found a special tiny that is obedient to her. Yes, I agree that that tiny should be in her panties 24/7. I wish I was that tiny. Sounds like heaven. Best position on the best giantess.

For some reason, I just don't see Mrs. May having hordes of tinies, or what you said "shoeboxes" of tinies. I think all these women have a limited number of them and they put all their attention on the tiny that they play with. While thousands of tinies pleasuring her seems awesome. I enjoy the thought of her enjoying 1 tiny at a time and then I picture myself as that tiny. I would be also happy that Mrs. May is focusing on just me and that she is aroused because of me, only me.

I think Faith is saving Carver for Candence. Also, I think she will swallow Carver in the end. She will put him in all of her holes. First, in her bum and she will squeeze him with her tight muscles on his plump body. The she will marinate him in her vagina, coating him in her juices and after that she will lick him slowly and then suck on him like a giant lollipop. Then finally, she slurps him inside and swallows, savoring his useless attempts to free himself. He slowly slides down her throat becuase he is so big. Candence giggles at the thought of Carver inside her. Carver finally lands in her stomach and Candence delights to know that she finally has Carver with her forever.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2016 6:08 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Part 2 of my review/rant.

Also, in your last response to my review, you said that you wouldn't drag it out because that's cruel. Well guess what. This chapter was cruel.
I'm used to you switching chapters to different characters, but changing a highly anticipated scene to something that involves faith is a big downgrade.

Maybe, we can have a random sneak peek of whoever Mrs. May is playing with. Maybe, get his perspective. I just want some Milf action and this was the greatest climactic sequence to lead us. Then it just all goes away.

Man, this chapter is more cruel than Julie fucking a mummified guy when he can't breathe. I mean, when he was debating what to do, it was basically "should I do what Tomspeedy wants or should I fuck with him" and boy did Julian's choice made my head spinning. Like why would he make such an unlike Julian choice??? What was that?

So Julian has a date with Faith's asshole and Mrs. May. At this point, Mrs. May talking to her pet is better than Faith shoving Julian inside her. That's how sexy Mrs. May is. Her words create arousal.

Cmon, Julian. You don't need a freakin plan to get Mrs. May on your side. Just let her fuck you the way she wants. Or at least watch her play with herself so you can learn about her. Why did he just abondon the whole thing all together.

This chapter....I don't know. There has got to be a redeem chapter coming up soon. I doubt any of the next few chapters will match what could have been done this chapter.

:(

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2016 10:25 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

I think we forget how sexy of a family this is.

We have Faith who is your traditional sexy girl who we have lusted over becuase she is simply hot.

Then there is the younger sister who has a sense of creativity and uses that make herself unique. While she herself is sexy too, it's what she does that makes her most interesting.

Then there is the mother. She hasn't done anything, but her control and dominance over her daughters and her tinies show that she truly is the queen that must be worshipped. She radiates power and she hasn't even played with a tiny yet. We know she is sexy because she used her body to lure Julian to her and is probably how she got her toys too.

I would love a backstory on how Mrs. May got her slave inside her panties. Maybe, she saw a person that looks similar to her husband and decided that he was the one to serve her. You know that she misses all that pleasure and she is experiencing it again with this lucky guy in her panties.

DW brings a great point. It could be the shrunk ray in the closet. In fact, we don't even know that a shrink ray exists, but this does make me wonder.

Julian also mentioned that Mrs. May might have a favorite. I think her little panty prisoner is that lucky slave. We can see that this guy is obedient since he stayed out when she commanded him. Also, she kept him inside her underwear the entire time except when she had to use the toilet.

Julie seems to get this from her mother about have panty prisoners. Julie just took it to a new level by mummifying her toys. Julie did it by force, Mrs. May probably seduced her toy instead.

If this was nighttime, I wonder if Julian will have a sleepover in Mrs. May's room. Will he get to see a special show with the prisoner? We know Julian might be a little jealous of this whole thing. Maybe, if she has to go to bed soon, she keeps this little man, all snug up close to her. Maybe she even ties him up so he cannot escape. If she does have a favorite, we know she won't let him go.

I'm hoping Mrs. May is kinky. Julian already suspected a bunch of sexy toys by her nightstand so I think Mrs. May has got a few tricks up her sleeve to keep her tiny obedient.

Personally, I also think this mom is freaking sexy and she is even keeping her little man in my favorite spot, her panties! Oh, what I would do to take his place.

I would volunteer to her toy. I know I say this about most giantesses that I read on this site, but this woman just seems like a dream come true. She likes to be sexy, naughty and even be in control. I can't stop thinking about this chapter.

Reviewer: AprilJoinerWeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 9:41 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places

Definitely one of Julie's playthings. It could be one that just barely survived the last "session" with Julie. I agree with Tom. They should be forced to decide between helping it or leaving it. They should choose to leave it, inflicting guilt and a reminder to the duo.

Author's Response:

Very astute analysis of what is to come. The next chapter addresses it soon enough ;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2016 12:29 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places

I just don't see too many tinies showing up, becuase then we won't care about them if they die or get played with. Yeah, I think mom does have a tiny but maybe not too many. I can't picture too many characters. Ex. In this box is Tob, Ron, bob, max, and Tyler. In this box is Chris, John, Joey, Chad, and Ben. Now in this box... You get the idea.

Or, maybe she just has one that she keeps just for her. Faith collects lots of tinies and she has argued that she wants more. Mom probably argued that it's too much responsibility and that's why she is pissed when Faith lost them just now. Faith's mistakes will make Mrs. May's argument stronger and that keeping one tiny is the perfect way to have fun and maintain control.

I think the second option is more likely.

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