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Reviewer: El Rodrigo Diaz De Vivar Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2016 8:28 AM Title: Josh in the Box

As usual the beginning of a great little peace of literary artwork. I just admire how you manage to implement the shrinking-fiction into a coherent framework making it pretty easy for the readers imagination to visualise the scenes.

I'm looking forward to the next chapters!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read this story and share your thoughts. I very much appreciate your input and providing feedback.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2016 1:02 PM Title: Josh in the Box

Interesting start Duggernaut.

Another story for your collection, and this one looks like it's back to your roots. A bunch of people acting cocky and then showing fear when they lose the power.

Teenage girls with playthings are quite common in this site. I'm curious to see what will make this one special. Knowing you are a special writer, I'm used this will be fantastic.

Speaking of special writing: "pussy sneezed on it". That's gold. I never thought of soiled panties like that, but it makes sense.

I'm also curious about if this story was a request, a story that you wanted to do, or you got another crazy plot and wanted to write something new?

I'm curious if there will be other giantesses coming up, or if his girl is the only one. If you are open to suggestions, I'm hoping for an MILF of this girl's mother to show up and be super horny like Miss Harwood in Tom's story.

Either way, I'm sure you will impress me. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey Tom this one has been rattling around in my head as an idea for some time now. It's a distraction from Tom's and Michael's stories while I try and retool bang your head. I know the theme is pretty familiar on the site so I wanted to paint it with my style and see if others liked it. So far the reception has been very rewarding. As always thanks for your input. Who knows if there will be other giantesses yet the story is still unfolding. We'll see. :)

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