[Report This]Date: April 26 2016 5:33 PM Title: Back in the Box
Ok, now this chapter seems awfully familiar. But from where? Ah yes, The Nefarious Nine. I guess this story is like the sequel.
Why is this familiar? Well, these guys found an opening in their "environment" and this is basically the same "escape" as what happened in Nefarious nine. Except instead of a toy prison, it's a shoebox.
What's with you and tiny guys trying to escape out of boxes? Lol.
This chapter made me just roll my eyes half of the time. There's the typical group that is not courageous and then there's the reckless dude who says "fuck it" and does anything he wants. Also, it's always the cat. Never a dog or any other animal. People are always scared of the giant cat. Lastly, the scared dude turns Julian and Josh's adventure into a scouting trip.
The escape sequences seem to be redundant but I'm loving the diologue, creativity, and suspense you create at the end of each chapter.
I really want to know what happens next, especially since they mention its nightfall, and always the scary stuff happens at night fall.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Except the Nefarious Nine, the felons were offing each other faster than the giantesses, lol. I think there are certainly some cliche repetitve elements in the genre and trying to keep it fresh is sometimes difficult but hopefully this one is at least fresh enough to keep readers engaged.