Reviews For Shoebox
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Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 01 2016 1:59 PM Title: Thinking Outside the Box

Good god, I'd only just finished at chapter 2 before taking a few days break. I come back and suddenly there's 4 more epic new chapters to read! Dude do you even find time to sleep with all this writing you do? xD

 

I meant to say from the start, that this is a great concept you got going. A shoebox of toys under a bed. the premise alone is exciting so I'm super keen to see how this cast of characters are gonna get around such a giant prison-style setting :D

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 28 2016 9:45 PM Title: Thinking Outside the Box

I wanna hear more! I want to get to know these characters. Especially Ham and Carver, they seem like they could be fun characters.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2016 5:27 PM Title: Thinking Outside the Box

I should've expected the title to be this, haha!

Hmm. Are the panties the same color as the box? If yes, that's good. Otherwise, it could be a problem. (I know the box has multiple colors, it's just that it might be noticeable from the outside.)

Hiding behind a shelf of toys. You know what would be kinky? She has a sex doll that looks just like a tiny man, and she picks one of these guys thinking it's her doll.

Or they hide INSIDE a sex doll and she uses it, giving them quite an experience.

Well, here comes the giantess!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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