Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2016 11:04 PM Title: The Finder of Lost Sheep

Finally they are caught! Well, I thought Josh was going to found first. I guess not.

I don't get what was happening to Julian at the end. Was she going to drop in a toilet? How are things not good? She won't just waste him like that. There is a reason why she kept him through all this.

Candence likes Carver. I suspect they will have some fun soon. Faith obviously gets Julian so that should be interesting.

I think I figured out how Josh is going to escape. Faith will remove the towel thinking Josh slipped through and then Josh can then escape to the rest of the house! Perfect!

I think I like how you setup this story. You have multiple guys to suffer different punishments to satisfy many readers and we can choose which tiny we would like to be in their position.

I'm rooting for whoever escapes the bedroom, and enters another room. (Like the master bedroom). That's who I will be following. It doesn't have to be Josh. I will even relate to Carver if he ends up there too.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

There is definitely a point in what faith is doing with Julian it will become clear next chapter. It might be time for faith's mom to at least make an appearance just for you.