[Report This]Date: June 07 2016 3:16 PM Title: Splashdown
Just read the story and I love it. I couldn't spot any spelling/grammar mistakes. As for the theme and genres they are some of my favorites. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. I hope you keep writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading this tale and sharing a review. I will do my utmost to keep spinning this yarn as long as there are people who want to read it :)
Date: June 07 2016 12:22 PM Title: Splashdown
Hopefully Josh can help out Julian eh? It's good to have some comic relief.
Author's Response:
Julian is awesome to write and the use of cutting or acerbic wit has certainly made him a reader favorite.
[Report This]Date: June 06 2016 9:17 PM Title: Splashdown
Listed in the tags? Water sports? Becuase that wasn't in the tags, lol.
I thought Faith's mom was arriving this chapter so I kinda feel disappointed. Then again, it seems to be soon.
Many people love Julian so I don't think Faith's mom should find him. I think Faith alone should play with him to satisfy the readers. Faith's mom could have like taken anyone else.
Faith said that Henry will get a reward for staying in the box. Will that mean being given to her mom? That would be awesome.
Now I'm thinking how Faith's mom will get a tiny. Will it be finding Julian in the toilet, Josh on the floor, Henry or Carver given to her. Anything can happen.
Maybe Faith's reward to Henry is to let him free of her room and then he gets picked up her mom.
So many possibilities! I hope her appearance is next chapter(if possible).
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Faith's mom is still a couple of chapters off. Patience Tom :)
Date: June 06 2016 8:32 PM Title: Splashdown
Beautiful. I was kind of hoping that was gonna happen to Julien from the moment he pissed on her pillow.
Author's Response:
He did kind of start it...