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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2016 6:22 PM Title: Girls/Boys

What a twist! Faith's mom just shows up and demonstrates her dominance! Ha! If there is a 50/50 for a tiny, I bet she wins all the time.

I love her controlling demeanor! She shows that she is in charge and that she gets what she wants, I love it.

Yay, she is taller, has nicely shaped hips, and good size breasts. I'm glad you kept on giving her body descriptions. Also, I like the brown hair too. Hoping she changes to yoga pants soon. I think she would love to show off her body. (I still don't know her name.)

Wow! When she said that there will be no more playthings, I thought that Mrs. May was going to take the tinies with her. That's what I wished had happened, but I think that would be too strong of a plot twist to have all the tinies wind up with her.

At first, I wondered what was the point of forbidding more tinies, and now I realized that it means that no more killing on purpose. That's a great sign for the tinies.

Haha, Julian likes her just like me. Then again, he seems to like every female so far. But I love how you mentioned that he prefers experienced women. That's exactly how I feel! I look at all these stories on this site and most of these ages are very young. (Yes, I think teen girls are young.) I find the women more attractive when they are a bit older and Julian has a good idea of what I'm talking about.

Most of the other readers seem to like Julian the most. I'm not sure if they may enjoy it if he ends up with Faith's mom. (Personally, I don't care who ends up with Faith's mom.) I just think that the other readers will like the Julian/Faith matchup. But let's see, shall we.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yep, Faith's mom shows up and lays the hammer down, there is no dispute who is in charge in that household. It does appear to bode well for the tinies if the girls are not allowed to replenish their supplies easily. We get a glimpse of julian's character a little more next chapter when he shares some of his views on the situation. I honestly don't know yet how the little guys are going to be dispersed, though I do think there may very well be a carver/girls chapter. We'll see. 

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