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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2016 5:07 PM Title: Hanging On By a Fingernail

I'm with Josh on this one. What the fuck Julian! I mean, they spent all this time escaping the box, hiding from these girls, and now he just decides to let himself get captured?

Lol, I found this hilarious, but I also agree with Julian a bit. These girls are gorgeous and why not just have some fun while being captured. That's what I would do in this situation as well.

I swear Julian has the same mentality as me. I just hope is smarter than he looks though. This proposal seems very risky, especially since he didn't discuss it with Josh.

Now what could it be. He referenced the conversation between Faith and mom which was about no more ( new ) tinies for Faith. Is Julian asking to get fucked? Part of me says yes, but I'm not sure.

This cliffhanger is frustratingly good. It has enough information to get me on the edge of my seat, yet has enough mystery that I can't tell what is going to happen next chapter.

So I really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter!!!! (Getting better each chapter, I can't wait!)

Author's Response:

Julian realized the noose was tighting and tried something different. we'll see if it pays off for him, or...

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