Date: July 08 2016 10:28 AM Title: The Offer
@ Tom Speedy
I think the mom sounds the most fun too; even though she was just given an introductory character developement, she gives off the air of having a closet full of shoeboxes stuffed with tinies.
Duggernaut is doing a terrific job with this story, so I don't want to sound critical or be influential of his plot because I really like what he's doing.
One thing I would like to see is Cadence finally getting her hands on Carver and having the fun with him she mentioned in an earlier chapter. Afterall, we haven't yet heard what her favorite activity with tinies is; though didn't she like Faith's boots and want to wear them? Some possibilities there perhaps?
Is Cadence really going to let Julian get away with all those insults? A small punishment might be in order, like another bathroom trip or a good ole fashion spanking.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the props. Next chapter will see some retributive payback for one of our little captives...
Date: July 07 2016 11:25 PM Title: The Offer
Fantastic story.
I'm a bit suprised Julian didn't request of Faith to be let loose to live out his time in her hot mom's room after playing the tricks on her sister. Perhaps even asking to actually be given to her mom as a present in a manner where he couldn't be hurt, like caged in a pendent on a long neckless that would dangle between the mother's breasts or have Faith present him as a tiny with a crush on the mom and who begs to serve the mother as an irreplacable foot massager that mom should keep and keep alive.
Just a thought; but keep doing the great work as you have been. Thanks for a terrific story.
Author's Response:
Julian surmised he might elicit a better chance targeting a known adversary. Faith might have balked at the mother idea seeing how quickly she buckled and accepted the punishment. Gain some trust first. then renegotiate, :)
[Report This]Date: July 07 2016 5:08 PM Title: The Offer
I think that was one of the most stupidest offers ever. Julian wants to risk his own safety, by venturing into foreign territory and in return, they get an upgraded box? Lmao!
If I was Julian, I would have said, ...actually, never mind. That is a good deal. I can't really think of better things that make sense. Of course, my crazy head would have said to drop me in Mrs. May's bed all tied up, but that's just me. (Yes, my reward is a form of torture)
I think this idea is good becuase it's basically a way of escape. Faith even mentioned them being captured, so if they don't come back, Faith may think that they are dead or are captured.
I hope this journey starts soon. It sounds exciting! Finally a way out of the bedroom! I wonder if one of them gets caught by the mom as they travel to Julie's room.
Faith tying Josh up? Already? And for what? Ha! I bet Julian is probably touching him self when he sees Faith have playtime with Josh.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
If you know you are going to get caught, is it really that stupid? Stupid like a fox!