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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2016 5:31 PM Title: Groping Around in the Dark

I agree, this was a funny chapter. The benter with Josh and Julian is great.



Author's Response:

I think even in the face of tribulation levity is a tool to keep people from going mad. Plus it's fun to write :)

Reviewer: Lupe Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2016 1:59 PM Title: Groping Around in the Dark

I like that you brought up Faith's plan for Julian again! I'm curious to see when and how that will play out... And that's after whatever happens in her sister's room!

Author's Response:

If Julian survives he's in for an ass load of trouble...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2016 12:11 PM Title: Groping Around in the Dark

Funniest chapter yet!

The conversations and the jokes were on point and I love how sinister Julian was with Josh's ideas.

I think this was the most I laughed for one of your stories. These guys make a great group.

My plan would be go into Julie's room, ruin he toys, cut her clothes like what Josh said, and then yeah, use bodily functions on her pillow, shoes, and stuff.

You know what would be a plot twist? Faith tells Julie about the tinies going to her room and Julie sets up traps for them. To trap Carver, use food. To trap Julian, use panties. To trap, Josh, um... A sewing needle? I don't know what Josh is into but he seems to like tools.

If it was just me on this quest, I'm going straight to Mrs. May's room. Spy on her a bit, and then if I get bored, try to get some action.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I am pleased this chapter tickled your funny bone. Julian has been a fun character to write for. I think you relate to him strongly on account of his fascination for faith's hot mom ;)

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