Date: August 15 2016 8:59 PM Title: Impulse Control
Just read Toms' review, well yeah, the mom is HOT; but still so is Faith. I do have to disagree with Tom on one major issue, if the mom is going to have fun with a tiny, don't make it the one already in her panty. The one already in there should be no more than that, a well trained panty prisoner for the mom, 24/7 mostly solitary confinement with no chance of parole, ever.
Of course he can please her and should, that's a major benefit for her; but when she REALLY wants pleasure the mom should have an army of tinies each with their individual designated task. Some may join her lone captive in her panty, others perhaps between her toes, a few dozen on her large breasts, others kissing her all over, some between her legs prostrate praying up to her womanhood.
Actually I disagree with Tom on two major issues {Sorry Tom} Faiths' Asshole is still SUPER HOT and if Julian talks his way out of going up there, somehow, there's always room for Carver (or is he reserved for Cadences' butthole? Perhaps Faiths' till Cadence shows back up, then up Cadence goes Carver "bye bye")
Date: August 15 2016 8:42 PM Title: Impulse Control
There's always the chance Julian finds Faiths' butt actually IS sweet. Perhaps finding this out gives Julian the idea the mothers' butt hole must be a varitable candy store and worth the risk of introduction. Maybe the companionship Julian always longed for is actually up the moms' hiney, he could even have a girl friend live up there with him.
If Faith is going to put Julian in her butt, hopefully it's for a prolonged time. Let's say as long as it takes a spranged ankle to heal. Faiths' asshole and convalescence spa!!!
Would be nice to have a scene of Julie getting undressed and all the tinies stuck on various spots on her body or trapped in her clothing.
[Report This]Date: August 15 2016 5:53 PM Title: Impulse Control
While this is a good chapter, I don't think I have ever been dissapointed so much before. I even had a countdown since I can kinda predict what time of day you post. (Except weekends.) It just went downhill as the chapter went on.
My expectations were like at the ceiling, and then Julian's stupid (yes, stupid) decisions made him leave paradise and enter hell inside an asshole.
In the beginning of the story, Faith's asshole sounded great and fun to read. In this chapter, it felt like an obstacle, something that I'm trying to get through as fast as possible to get to the finish line with Mrs. May. Becuase Faith is nothing compared to Mrs. May.
You put so much detail in every scene, (which is good) but sometimes it makes the story seem slower and now I worry that the next visit Julian makes will be like 5+ chapters from now. Maybe even September since its like a chapter every 4 days.
I remember for the Miss Harwood chapters in Tom's story, I was so excited and I loved the detail about every scene. I would read the chapters over and over again becuase they were just that good! When Cassidy said that Katie was coming over, Katie did and then took Tom, then played with him, then took him home, more play, then took him to school, and things got better and better.
Instead, in this story, this is probably the biggest tease ever. First there was the Josh chapter, now this. And I thought Julian was horny as I was. I guess not. If I was him, (well, you know what I would do.) I would watch her play with that guy and then maybe take his spot. That's right. I would go into her panties, free that dude, and then let myself stay in there so she can play with me. Why da fuck did Julian decided that he needed strategy? Wtf.
Julian should have just jumped right in. Josh gave Faith an excuse so he can mess around with Mrs. May as long as he wants! It was setup so beatifully.
If I was Josh and I see Julian return next chapter, I would be thinking "wtf, I distracted ur ass and you come back?!!" Seriously, everyone thought Julian would have stayed in that room for the next 10 chapters. Why did he have to stay for only 2 chapters at most?
And to think that this story was going to be more exciting that Tom's story and Nick's story. Well, now it's back in 3rd place. Nick in 1st, Tom's in 2nd.
But, I can't seem to wonder why would you change such a beautiful situation? I thought everyone was enjoying it and then .... Wtf, random change. I know you like to surprise people, but this one was uncalled for. Hopefully, Faith goes to her room, wraps Julian up and drops him back into Mrs. May's room. Why can't we get surprised like that? I know I'm complaining; I just...I just wished this chapter was different. Ohhhh, the expectations were off the charts!
Usually I would give 10 stars, but this time u get an 8. It should be a 2 but that would just be a result of my dissapointment and now how good of a chapter it was.
I can't wait for the chapter where Julian returns. Not the ones in Faith's room.