[Report This]Date: August 18 2016 5:34 PM Title: Mother May I
Whoa! Wait a second there Duggernaut.
Where are you getting these names? I thought Mrs. May's first name was going to be from the list I made like 20 chapters ago. I don't recall "Merys" being one of them. I think I had Mary, but that's the closest that I think I had to the name you chose.
Also, I thought Faith is the elder daughter. In this chapter, it seems like Julie is the elder one. Or am I mistaken?
Next, wtf, a tiny tracking device on her phone??)!!!?!! Now that's awesome! She knew the whole time. I was thinking that maybe she could've saw something, but I never expected that she actually know soemthign was there and let alone a tiny.
Also, I thought Mrs. May's tiny was going to be Tom. Instead it's Thea, and a girl? What? I remember you very first stories with like Jack Dalton, you had a theme where the girls were usually weaker and by becoming giantesses they can punish the men. I find it interesting that this Thea girl is being used, but at least it looks like she enjoys it.
Wait, so she has only Thea? You mean Faith and Julie have more tinies but mom has a tracking device? She should have more, but I'm kinda glad she has one tiny. I wish that tiny was Tom though. :)
I love how sophisticated and patient she is. She refused to snatch him up and instead is letting Julian come back to into her trap.
The tracker reminded me of Pokemon go. I hate to bring it up, but it's funny to think about it. "Hey, look a Julian is over there!" "Hey, I found a Thea!" I bet Mrs. May could find other tinies to use for her pleasure.
Hey Mrs. May, on the outside of your house is another tiny named Tom taking shelter on the porch. Maybe you should take him with you. :)
So many possibilities. Not exactly a redeem chapter for the last one, but it definatley makes me happy knowing that the story will return to this.
When I saw the chapter title, my brain was doing flips and my heart was pounding. I thought you changed your mind and she was actually snatch Julian before he escape to Faith's room. I don't know why, but I just had a glimmer of hope.
Well, at least this chapter made me feel a lot better. Love how the mom is in control of this situation.
I can't wait for the next chapter!