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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2016 8:19 PM Title: The Red Death

Tom Speedy, you just reminded me with your comment.  Well Julian's already been up Faith's asshole, he's been up Cadence's asshole; rather than killing Julian, Julie might decide to punish(?) him, perhaps now it's time for Julian to get shoved up Julie's asshole too.  

If so, hopefully for a lot longer this time.  It would be funny if the mother comes looking for Julian, finds out he's up inside yet another asshole and decides her own asshole is where she's going to keep Julian once she gets him.  Heck, Julian must be developing a taste for girl ass by now.

It would be nice if Josh makes it back to the safety of Faith's panty to heal up {or live there. he he he}.



Author's Response:

Certainly gives credence to the term 'ass clown' :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2016 4:02 PM Title: The Red Death

Judging by the title alone, I'm a bit worried for Julian. We know that Julie is capable of killing them, but the question is will she? If she thinks that Julian is one of Faith's favorites, then I think Julie will have something else in mind.

You know what would be a funny twist? Julie decides to give Julian to her mom becuase she thinks that Faith will never negotiate Julian back. And in the end, Julian would be happy.

Julian can't die. He is way too valuable. Also, I want him to be in good shape for Mrs. May.

I just hope he makes it all right.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Sooooo close...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2016 1:27 PM Title: The Red Death

I was thinking that the future of the story would be: Josh eventually gets set free, and Julian become's Mom's willing slave. This could complicate that.



Author's Response:

We shall see...

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2016 11:15 AM Title: The Red Death

Either the mother comes and takes Julian away for herself or it's Ba-Bye!  Hmmm, if the mother were to take Julian, would she call for Josh to show himself and take him too or would Josh be left to his fate hiding in Julie's room???

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