[Report This]Date: May 03 2016 9:55 AM Title: Chapter VIII: A matter of fear!
The story is actually not bad. It's getting better by each chapter.
The beginning is similar to many stories so I had my doubts but these next few chapters make it interesting again.
I think you should make your title more simple. Something that people can identify a lot quicker. I think a "Logan's fate" could be a good alternative. My point is that when people scroll through stories, a short title helps.
Nonetheless, it's a good story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to review!
Yeah it's a pretty common opening I'll try to develop into something more unique.
Title is updated to your idea since I've thought about changing it anyway and didnt have any good idea.
Working on the next chapter at the moment!