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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 9:25 PM Title: Chapter XII: Change of plans

Wow! What a twist with that escape! That was very entertaining to read and I bet no one in that facility expected that.

Hmm. I guess my title suggestion for your story didn't work. Worth a shot I guess.

Story is picking up pace, I like it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey thanks for reviewing again you're kind of the only one actively digging the story. Your suggestion still was pretty good and I'll keep it like that since it matches better with the previous titles anyway.

I hope you like how the plot resolves ultimately in the last chapter I've published today.

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