You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: TiniestofSparks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2012 11:32 AM Title: The Initiation

You've just entered my all time faves. I hope your creative spark still burns. What an amazing scenario. Well done, artist.

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2008 10:12 AM Title: The Initiation

Hi there!

This is actually another or one last try, :(, to get in contact with you, tried the pm function here but either you are not anymore out there :( or it does not work.

Let me first say, both of your stories are really the best I knew and ever have read. I'm mostly into micro unaware vore and insertion, so, you see why I'm liking your two stories so so much. I don't know any other author here who ever had combined micro unaware with such great detailed story telling, story ideas and deepness of the characters.

The first time I read your stories it started to change something deep in with me. I was long time not sure what I really want or like the most. But your stories changed that. After reading I was so stunned and full of emotions I knew it instantly. That was what I wanted, that was what I would like the most. Your stories were in complete agreement of my inner heart feelings.

That was what I wanted to tell you :) And of course... if you're still out there, somewhere... please, for god's sake don't stop writing! Or acutually, please start it again :)

I so damn hope to get an reply from you to this little comment of mine one day.

Bye!!!



Author's Response:

Thankyou. I'm amazed that my stories have had such an affect on you. I am sorry I have not posted anything new in so long. I'll try and have some new chapters done in the next few days. So when you see the next chapter, know that your comment was the motivation.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2008 4:17 PM Title: The Initiation

Lovin' this story. Keep it coming

Reviewer: Jester Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2008 9:19 PM Title: The Initiation

Kudos.  Amazing. 

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2007 6:43 AM Title: The Initiation

  O, yes, I found this story very good...except for a few details. I do hope I don't ruffle your feathers with my comments: Firstly, why do you (and all writers in America) stick rigidly to political correctness? I refer to your description of schoolgirls being 'women' and schoolboys as 'men.'?  Okay, so we know the powers have made rules that youngsters are now classified as 'adults' once they reach 18, but, in context, especially in stories such as are in this site, surely one can ignore those rules?  BTW: WHAT EXACTLY IS A "CAMEL'S TOE" as described in chapter 3?  Can it mean a 'hump' or a bulge?  Women sounds too old. Otherwise, jolly good yarn, and thanks for sharing it with us.

Author's Response: I admit it could be seen as political correctness to refer to a "schoolgirl" as a woman. But in actuality the character is twenty years old and by any definition a woman. So it was entirely my decision to refer to her as a woman. I also didn't realize that the term "Camel Toe" was exclusively American. It is kind of a crude slang for when tight clothing reveals the form of a woman's privates. I enjoy the fact that this site caters to readers in other countries. And I will try to up the level of professionalism in my writing to match the honor of having an international audience.

Reviewer: Ronnie Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2007 11:20 PM Title: The Initiation

I gotta say, this is one of the better vore stories I've read in awhile.  But I'd expect no less from Galstaff.  Speaking of which, are you going to continue your other adventures?

Author's Response:

I'm baffled that my story can recieve almost a thousand views in twenty four hours. Thankyou for the huge compliment. Let's just say that if you have a direction you want a story to go feel free to suggest and I will do my best to integrate any ideas suggested.

Reviewer: girlfood Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2007 4:09 PM Title: The Initiation

Galstaff! Amazing work. Please continue this story! I really look foward to Kate's future vore adventures with her friends.

Reviewer: Vito Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2007 2:37 AM Title: The Initiation

Good  writing,strong story line, and excellent continuity.  I was glued to this read from the first word to the last.  I look forward to the rest of the story.

You must login (register) to review.