Reviewer: Sir Purple Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2016 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

I wil start by saying that i only read the first chepter now but i can see this is a great story. There is a very special writing type in this story.

 

I remmember reading your story about matt abd Emilia a year ago or so and i was very happy to discover now you still wtiting.

I wondering now if you areworking on another story now or havee one in mind?

Author's Response: Hello sir wolf! First off, thank you very much for the feedback- I appreciate it very much and I am happy that you read Matt and Amelia in the past! In regards to your question, yes, I am currently working on a couple of short stories and also a big collaboration project with another author on this website. I wish I could say more but we haven't gone public with it yet. the short stories will be released every once in a while and the project will hopefully be stated relatively soon, depending on the various workloads (both real life and Internet) of my coauthor and myself. I hope to keep impressing on you, as I truly hope you enjoy the rest of the story! :)

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2016 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

Well done, take a bow. This is pure excellence. 

Author's Response: Dude, you flatter me :) thank you so much for reading and the constant support!

Reviewer: GTS33 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

Have to admit, was reluctant to read at first but the story really grew on me. I'm thoroughly enjoying it so far. Keep up the great work! 

Hope to see more great stories like this one in the future :)

Author's Response:

Well, I am super glad you stuck with it, man. Thank you so much for giving it a shot! 

Reviewer: ColdAtlas Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2016 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

You know who these two remind me of? Rixie and Alex from the Titan series. Their playful banter to even how their relationship sort of sparked reminds me so much of them. I'm also sure that Rix might be a little taller than Darcy if she was Hunan though.

Author's Response: You know, I've never read that series. I'm definitely gonna have to give it at least a once over. Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2016 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

@Cary, I wasn't unaware of that little um...euphemism? That's something new for me!

Author's Response:

Cary is a wealth of information. 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2016 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

I've read about Darcy burning her fajitas so many times XD

Loved this, so much emotion and it feels so real too.

Author's Response: Lol that is true. I've never even learned to make fajitas. I'm glad that people are picking up on the emotional charge that I'm trying to convey. I was worried that it would come off as too sudden or unconvincing. Thank you for reading! All 3 times!

Reviewer: thewiking2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

This is a very good start! Nice pacing, not getting caught up in unnecessary detail, but still keeping it interesting. The two main characters seem to have personality, which is great, and I'm looking forward to reading about what darker thoughts lurk beneath the surface of Darcy's conscious mind :)

Author's Response: Well thank you, man! This story I really tried to stretch myself in writing and I'm finding that it's super fun to do. I love writing these two characters, and it's been very fulfilling and satisfying to have Darcy and Andrew interact the way they do. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

The story is pretty solid. You've got good description and introspection.

My only slight critiques are that you're overusing the term 'dwarfing', and the pace could pick up just a bit.

As someone who does like Vore, I hope you change your mind about Darcy never intentionally eating him though. ;-)

Author's Response:

Thanks man! 

Dwarfing I can fix. The pace... eh. The story is 90%ish written, and unfortunately it may stay a slower pace... for now. My hope is that the second half of the story will make up for the pace in the first half (which lasts for about 2 more chapters). 

Anyhow, as to the vore... who knows ;) something may still be on the... 'menu' for Darcy. ;)

Reviewer: shadowrust Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

Solid. It's been a while since I've seen any good gentle giantess stories.

Of course, I am eagerly awaiting some scenes with more giantess action.

Author's Response: Dude, I'm so happy you like it! This story has been in my head for a while so it feels great to finally get it out into the world. As far as gts action, this one starts out slow- there're little tidbits here and there to keep things interesting, but there is moooost deeeefinitely some heavy gts action here near the ending of the story (the second half, actually.) In fact, I may just release the third and fourth chapters together, just to get the show on the road. Who knows, though? What do you think?

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2016 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Apologies and Bacon

I'm really liking this. I hope you continue it.

aaron

Author's Response: I'm vey glad you're liking it! Most of it is written so yes, most definitely plan on continuing this story :) thank you for reading!