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Reviewer: Dante123113 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2016 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 5: Secret Secret, I've Got A Secret

The story has come along well, I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Well thank you very much for reading! I really appreciate the support. I'm planning on having the next chapter out around Thursday or Friday. Thank you!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2016 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 5: Secret Secret, I've Got A Secret

@Nostory: "Cutting of the cheese" is how we, of the 1960's referred to f**ting. Which is what I thought Darcy had tricked her little boyfriend into saying.

Author's Response:

You are correct! :) 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 5: Secret Secret, I've Got A Secret

@Cary, I actually thought it was something to do with yoghurt or cheese. 



Author's Response:

Cheese :) 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2016 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 5: Secret Secret, I've Got A Secret

P.S.---evidently, that Youtube video no longer exists.

Author's Response: Unfortunate. Anyhow, look up 'old time religion' (Moses hogan arrangement) on YouTube. I think the Mormon tabernacle choir has a pretty good rendition of it. That's the hymn Darcy is singing/humming.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2016 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 5: Secret Secret, I've Got A Secret

Nostory was right. The proposed title is simply how the late, great Wm. Buckley would have described the passing of digestive gas. ;-)

Author's Response: Yeah but it's funny!!! :)

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