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Reviewer: Dante123113 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2016 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 7: ダーシージラー

Nice chapter! I enjoyed the at,osphere change, this one was so much lighter and full of teasing than the other, it was nice!
Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Thanks, Dante! It was certainly fun to write. thank you so much for reading! :)

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 7: ダーシージラー

These two are adorable. The playful banter, cat and mouse games, and Godzilla/Jack and the Beanstalk references were all quite hot and very amusing. And I like that Darcy can't seem to master high heels.



Author's Response: Lol. A lot of girls I know hate high heels for that exact reason. I had a lot of fun writing this one- all the references I hope we're not too cheesy, but I really like how it turned out. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2016 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 7: ダーシージラー

To paraphrase Mark Twain: "Let us humbly draw the curtain of privacy across the rest of this scene."

Nicely poignant, btw. :-)

Author's Response: Lol nope, you guys stuck this out with me, and so were gonna see some T, A, and P. :) thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2016 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 7: ダーシージラー

Japanese for Gozilla? Good work in using a non-English title for this! I feel like the first paragraph would fit into one of my ongoing stories....



Author's Response: Lol, while it is Japanese, it actually translates to "da-shi-jira-" Darcyzilla! I was kind of worried gtsworld would allow for katakana characters on the website, lol and behold, it does. Which story do you think the opening paragraph could fit into? Thanks for reading! :)

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