Date: August 03 2016 9:35 AM Title: Climax
Thanks for making this more sexual, I like these gentle almost maternal romances. But serously when you make a title called climax my mind started to come up with things. I hope you go further with sexyness as well as contune with Omega: inharentence, I want to find out what happended with the sisters.
Author's Response:
I'm guessing a lot of people thought I was going somewhere different based on that chapter title. And I will show the characters from Inheritance again someday.
Date: August 02 2016 9:16 PM Title: Climax
I loved the imagery of Jack on the incomprehensible land mass of Claire's hand. And the last lesson was very powerful. Nice idea to end with a reminder for Ashley of what it's like to be small and vulnerable.
Great story overall. As I said before, my only disappointment was that certain lessons weren't longer (or in less classy language, I was hoping for more boobs and mouthplay). But that's just personal taste. The fact that I was clamoring for more shows that this was well written and quite enjoyable. This was a very unique concept for a story and I enjoyed the ride.
Author's Response:
Thanks man. I've been trying to increase my variety in stories, inch by inch. Glad to hear you still liked it.
[Report This]Date: August 02 2016 5:22 PM Title: Climax
Interesting. Ashley still fears Claire. This friendship/trust she had with Claire, Jenna and Melody is gone.
It is good she is close with Jack. Now she needs her own Alpha sized home to give her back some self worth.
Author's Response:
I'm not sure I'd say she quite fears her, but she definitely has an even fuller understanding now of what happened between her and Jack, and subsequently her sister, Claire, and Jenna, two years back.
[Report This]Date: August 02 2016 4:40 PM Title: Climax
Ironically suitable title for this concluding chapter. Ironic in that there was no carnal sex as most lurkers no doubt automatically assumed. And, yet, suitable in that not _only_ is this the concluding chapter. But, in concluding, it leaves the hopelessly old-fashioned romantics (like me) feeling satisfied that Jack and Ashley will _most definitely_ live happily ever after.
Author's Response:
Hehe. I probably did mislead a few people with the title. Hopefully it was still satisfying for most.