Sorry, A.R. Youtube claims nothing exists under that heading. I even got the white frown-ey face against the black background!

I like that you're taking the time to set it up properly. Erotica and horror are so much better when they come out of well developed characters.

As for you, Carycomic, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8y-FGDwjLr0

Part of me hops Scott is just being good-naturedly facetious. But, another part has the uncomfortable feeling that he's going to go too far, out of pure malicious mischief, and Nick will get into a big fist fight with him.

With the black-eyed, bloody-lipped loser turning out to be TJ's boyfriend.

Author's Response:

Scott does seem to be a little more pesty than good natured ribbing. The dynamic between Nick and Scott will become clearer shortly 

Well, thus far, Asha isn't being the stereotypical wicked stepsister. But, then again, this story is still young. Isn't it?

Author's Response:

Wicked I think is a matter of perspective as I wax philosophical.  We have yet to see what a huge power imbalance does to her id and how he adapts to being on the short end of the stick. 

The teasing continuous!!!!
I didn’t realize you were under me
The world play was 200/20!

I love these statements she makes:

"I didn’t realize you were under me"
-this is a reference to unaware.

"Was that you making a fuss down there earlier in the night last evening?”
-this is a reference to when he gets put in her cleavage or panties.

"You must think I’m awful, stomping away on top of you,”
-reference to foot fetish and crushing.

"Don’t worry, I’m sure you will be as quiet as a little mouse,"
-reference to keeping him quiet and shrinking him to the size of a mouse.

Those references were awesome!

Also, I love how she is wearing skin tight clothes, my favorite style!

I love Asha's confidence. It makes me nervous and excited at the same time.

I can't wait for school! Then we can meet the other students and get this show on the road, literally.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Asha is a sassy girl. Thought would might like this character.

@TomSpeedy: I like to think I give as much popularity as I receive (if not more so).

Author's Response:

You have been very generous and I thank you for making the time to share your thoughts.

To paraphrase the late, great Lewis Carroll: interestinger and interestinger!

Author's Response:

"Begin at the beginning and go on till you come to the end; then stop." another little nugget from Mr. Carroll

Well, at least he was gracious enough to sincerely thank her for a much bigger bedroom.

Author's Response:

Isn't teenage angst awesome? Next he'll be trying to drive a wedge between them to try and get his parents back together.

Yay! This story is back! I was expecting Mo's story to come back first, but nonetheless, I can't wait for this adventure.

Nick seems like an introvert. I think of myself as an introvert, so when I witness odd things, I think of weird explanations also.

Haha, when Calista said there was another man in the house, I thought she had like a son, Asha's brother or something. Especially since the title was family and friends.

Asha is definately teasing Nick! I mean, I have seen similar things too in real life. I once saw this girl just lick and suck a lollipop and stare at this guy while she was doing it. (I wish I was that guy. Actually, I wish I was the lollipop.) The guy never even really looked at her despite how attractive she was. I just kept thinking, is she like asking him on a date by doing that, and now I just laugh at my self for thinking like that.

In your other stories where a giantes swallows a guy, I don't think she will swallow a guy in this story. I think the little guys will be too rare to just eat them like that.

I said Asha was teasing big time this chapter, but I still got my eye on Calista. If there is still a Tom in this story, I want him to be with Calista, the dream!

I thought TJ was a guy's name. I was so confused that Asha's friend was TJ. When Asha, said TJ and Nick turned around, I thought the girl's boyfriend was TJ and he showed up behind Nick. It might take some time for me to get used to TJ as this lovely girl.

For sure, I thought Asha was going to put her foot on Nick's crotch or something. When you described the seating and had Nick sit in between Calista and Asha, I thought there was a reason why this happened.

It's similar to when you are on your first day of class and all the seats in the classroom are full except this one seat that is positioned between these 2 lovely ladies.

Or when u go on a flight and your seat just happens to be the middle seat between some gorgeous women. Then in the middle of the night, you wake up and see one of the women just leaning on you as she sleeps and her hands rests on your crotch. As you see this, you get a boner and as your boner grows, her hand moves a little and you are half nervous, half excited.

Just random thiughts, but that's what that lunch scene reminded me of.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

The redo on Mo is pretty expansive so it will be a bit yet. Why did i think you would have your eye on Calista? TJ short for Taja, you'll get used to it. :) There will be more on Asha yet, of course. I've kind of got Nick like a loner, but feeling isolated he yearns to meet someone he can relate too but is reluctant because of the psychological leftovers from his parents broken marriage. He is confused, angry, hurt. Generally, like most teenagers.