@Giantesslover122,

Um, choice A means death. You sure about that?

Funny. You and I both know that you are not torn over which direction you are going to take. This was just a way to get a good laugh, and you are right. While this choice is obvious for me, I find it funny that other direction is death.

Yeah, we need Tom. He is the counterpart of Nick. He makes Nick feel proud of himself and Tom resembles what Nick would have been if he wasn't so tough.

Ok, let's say Tom get's discovered. I'm just wondering how will he get discovered. Does he tickle someone in fear that he gets crushed? If I were Tom, I would run to a soft body part and chill there. That way, of the girls collide, Tom will be squeezed a bit, but no harm done.

Clever tactic with the collar bone. Sexy girls usually got a decent sized groove under there and I can easily picture Tom getting trapped in it.

Glad to see a good chunk of progress. It's funny that Tom is the one initiating it. It's like it was up to me to make things go forward and I took my chance to approach these girls.

Congrats Tom! He just kissed the girl that he has been worshiping for years. Not just that, but she is a giantess and now he is up close to her body. This scary situation might even excite him. I can't wait for him to see Asha's mom. I bet he will like her too.

Will Asha discover Tom or Tj? Will they both wake up? Will they think it's a dream or will they know that Tom is real and they play with him.

I love this cliffhanger, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

The notion of the unaware crush was to create a sense of guilt among the girls so that they would be more inclined to keep Nick a secret to prevent knowledge of Tom's unfortunate demise. The feedback I'm receiving is generally more in line to Tom living so I'll have to get creative. I kind of knew what your leaning would be :)

I honestly can't recall ever reading a story that had a romantic pentagon. Scott will probably become the sex slave of Hester, who'd rather it be Nick. But, he's currently the person of carnal interest in the eyes of his stepsister, who's likewise being crushed on by Tom!

I know you'll try, just to spite me. But, I really don't think you can make this anymore--delightfully--complicated than you already have. :-)

Haha! Nick is basically countering all of my ideas! I mean, being Asha's pet doesn't even sound so bad. Especially since Tom is in love with Asha, so the whole experience is beneficial to him. He even worships her. Might as well present himself as a gift to her.

Nothing like sneaking into a hot girl's room while you are tiny. It's very exhilarating and I bet it's even a bit scary for them too. The fear and excitement is making this trip more fun.

So Scott is waiting for Hester to return from Asha's place, but Hester didn't show up to Asha's house yet, so I'm curious what will we see with Scott next chapter.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hmmmm! All this note-comparison, between Tom and Nick, is starting to make me suspect where Scott got that orange goop in the first place.

Author's Response:

An accident or an accident ;)?

Felt a bit lacking compared to the rest of your chapters. Nothing too significant happened either.

The shoe scene was kinda cool. It's always great to see when a tiny realizes how smal they are.

The headphones as rope is a great idea. I don't know why I haven't seen that before. I read way too many giantess stories for that not to be a common idea.


Really Duggernaut?!! Lol! Tom staying a virgin even in college. Haha! You know what I think. Tom will get some random super hot girl, but she is the one in control and that's why she stays with Tom. Other guys are jealous of Tom, but since he worships this girl, this hottie is with him.

So this chapter was about climbing stairs. I felt like this chapter could be about the travel in general, including stairs, room, and maybe a hallway. The detail was great, I just think more progress could be made on that climb.

Nonetheless, I am excited for when the girls see them and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Kind of a context chapter trying to illustrate how even something that used to be simple can be so incredibly challenging. I like to be innovative with the environment like using the headphones as a scaling aid so I'm glad it seemed fresh for you.

Subject is ready to be fucked. Yep, that's basically what I saw from this. Hester has complete control over Scott and Scott can't do anything about it. His strength was his physical body and now that's his weakness.

Ah, so Hester goes to Nick's house and explains the situation to Asha. Then Asha and friends search for Nick as Hester returns to being Scott to the party.

Let the scavenger hunt begin! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Scotts forunes have certainly taken a turn for the worse. Another thing to think on another reviewer suggested is what will Hesters do with the residue she collected? The shrink may have only just begun

Let the aforementioned competition... commence! :-)

Author's Response:

Could be interesting...

@Ancient Relic: depends on whether or not Asha can stand a "little" competition.

I think you're right, Nick. If memory serves, shrinking was only previously possible in Wonderland. Ba-DUM-boom!

Seriously, though: what was in that orange stuff that could so radically alter Hester Coppertones (or whatever the biochemical name was) into a glorified shrinking potion? Oh, yes, I know. You're probably saving that answer for chapter 18, at the earliest. But, given the hints you've already dropped (like the mysterious midnight scrambling sounds Asha made the night Nick first go to LA), something tells me that bio-miniaturization of local men is not as unprecedented as Tom, or Hester, might think!*

*And, if I'm over-thinking, my apologies. Just call it being "too emotionally invested" in the plot. ;-)