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Reviewer: SoinaGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2016 9:18 PM Title: Wake up bro!

This story is just simply amazing. This is basically the reason why I just made this account so I could review. Helpful tips: so yes I am female and mabey Kaitlyn gets shrunk down while Ricky gets back to full size? Ricky had a crush on her right? So Ricky treats her with repeat and cares for her while Kaitlyn learns what it kinda means not to be a cruel sexpot? Tip 2: If you could add a female tiny named Soina dat be da bomb (your number 2 fan) as TomSpeedy absolutely takes first! ;).

Author's Response:

LOVE MEETING FEMALE MICROS! I legit get so happy. I've always wanted to know a girl that's into this stuff. *hint hint* 

 

Lol on a serious note, I can absolutely get you into this story. Any preference that you DON'T want me to do with your character, or do you just want them to have your name?

Reviewer: JTH2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2016 8:57 AM Title: Wake up bro!

Can I ask that you introduce me as a character. First name Joe and could you please make me a relative of one of the female characters. If there's a way for me to become a tiny that would be great! Thanks in advance:)

Author's Response:

Sure! Already have an idea of what I can do. It may take a while to introduce you though but being that you are wanting to be a relative, I assume you don't mind incest? If you do that's an easy fix but it could give me more of an oportunity.

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2016 10:09 AM Title: Wake up bro!

Not sure if you skipped over my last review, but you should check out Inconvenient Coincidence by max333 or the story he based it off of Brian's solemate by duck12345.  I love the idea behind both of these stories maybe they'll spark some ideas for future stories.

I can't believe I'm saying this but kind of disappointed in 5 chapters in one day.  If you do it again you should spread it out over the week.  So excited to see them I read them all right away.

I'm not sure about adding even more people to the story.  For me it just drowns out the plausibility.  Keeping it secret and reducing the shrinkees makes it plausible but the more you add and the more people who know makes it to fictitious.  You never know lol.



Author's Response:

I am familiar with the first story you mentioned. I'll have to read them to get an idea for Ricky, but things are going to get interesting so don't worry about the other shrunken people, it'll kind of work itself out xD 

Reviewer: JTH2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2016 5:45 AM Title: Wake up bro!

This is definitely my favourite story I think ever on this site. I love it even though it includes older women which is not my thing AT ALL, but I guess that also shows how much I love this story.

Author's Response:

Awww you are just too kind! I am glad you are enjoying this story and I can't beleive how many people find this as their favourite. Like, I didn't even think I could be a good writer but all of this support and Love has given me a different outlook on it for sure.

Reviewer: smotherslave101 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2016 12:10 AM Title: Wake up bro!

OMG 5 chapters you are the best btw i have read the 2 you talked about but if you havent read about it although its not filled with sexual action this (The Giantess's Children by Kickyou) is amazing and really well written

 

thanks for all your hard work

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2016 9:15 PM Title: Wake up bro!

@ratt35

Yeah, I don't mind if you use my name. I would be honored to be in your story.

As for the personality, let me guess. I (the reviewer) am a super horny person who enjoys all this sexy stuff, but my character will actually hate all this but is forced to do some sexy things which I (the reviewer) will like.

If yes, I approve. Well, actually, I approve of any personality. I'm just glad that a Tom might be in this story. Maybe I can influence where he will end up. After all, I love giving you ideas.

Reviewer: AprilJoinerWeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2016 4:15 PM Title: Wake up bro!

This story is so good I wish I didn't have to stop reading! I like the unaware stuff! Definitely have to keep some of that in the future chapters. Especially when they were in the lingerie store and when Ricky was glued to her panties. You should do some unaware stuff at the school. Either with teachers or students in the classroom, toilet, gym, etc. Maybe they get seperated. You're the expert and you definitely need to write more often :)

Author's Response:

Oh my, could this be a female here? I saw your name is April Joiner so I'm assuming you are a female?

I only freak out because I haven't actually met a girl that is interested in this fetish and I WANT TO MEET ONE SO BAD! xD I am by no means an expert but thank you so much for your kind words. I'll defintiely try and incorporate more unaware stuff. If not in this story, then any others I plan to write for sure. I may dedicate one completely to unaware. Like maybe a short story. Beacuse you wanna know a little secret? Unaware stuff is like my favorite. It's probably the one thing that drove me to attempt writing. I am so happy with the amount of Love and support I am getting from everyone that has read my story so far. When I was writing the first few chapters, and having to make revisions, and at one point I even changed an entire chapter to make it better. I was so nervous because I was wanting to make something everyone will enjoy and Love and make something for everyone. Not just ass guys (like me) but also for unaware, feet, and even the super kinky stuff while also trying to make it realistic to the characters.

I will write more often for sure :) maybe I'll get to the point where I can manage two stories at once like Duggernaut is doing. Super talented guy.

You should stay in touch with reviewing my story! If you are a female, then you can totally suggest some things with the girl characters since you are a girl and all. I assume that since you are enjoying it so far, I have done a decent enough job with them?

Thank you so much for reviewing! I appreciate all of them from everyone!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2016 4:11 PM Title: Wake up bro!

@Ratt35,

More tinies?!! I'm not sure if I should be excited or disappoint. Excited becuase more tinies means more opportunities for fun. Dissapointed becuase less focus on Drake and Ricky.

Hmm. Maybe there is a tiny called Tom Speedy who is like a long time friend of Ricky and he somehow shrinks and is found by Christina! The only guy I see shrinking is Charles, but I think a guy named Tom can shrink and he can be a prisoner for Christina. I pick Christina since Rachel just loves ass and Patricia has Charles. I think Ricky can bounce around from girl to girl and Tom should just be kept by one sexy woman all the time. (Christina).

Now wouldn't that be something.

Author's Response:

You inadvertently just gave me an idea for a character to include. Due to one of the plot lines, there were going to be a few characters introduced. If you don't mind, I will inlcude your name, but I will give him his own personality. It may not be yours but you may like it so why the hell not?

Reviewer: smotherslave101 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2016 2:37 PM Title: Wake up bro!

Amazing Story your story was what got me into this website in the firstplace and i have never looked back Keep up the amazing work

 

5 stories one day!!!!!! so hyped



Author's Response:

Woahh really??!! Like, my story got you hooked on this site? That's amazing! I'm so happy that I helped you explore yourself more and enjoy your fetish with others like you. Keep exploring! There are tons of stories that are way better than mine and start with Duggernaut and Jack Smith. Those two are some of the best writers on this site. 

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2016 12:26 AM Title: Wake up bro!

I'm enjoying the story. I do however thi k the five chapters in a single day is a bit dumb if I'm being honest. Just do one mega chapter if they're all going to be in one day, it's pointless to do them separate



Author's Response:

Thank you for your input! I am glad you are enjoying this story.

I do understand your suggestion completely, but the reason I am doing 5 chapters in one day is because I have been alternating chapter between Ricky and Drake and while doing one massive ultimate chapter would be perfectly okay, it could get a bit confusing not just for the reader, but also for me writing it if jumble all of them together in one big chapter.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2016 1:53 AM Title: Wake up bro!

Its Saturday! I can't wait for the 5 chapters coming today! I hope you post them one at a time so I can read each one and write a review before the next chapter is posted.

Author's Response:

Whoa!! Slow down there a little bit lol. 

If you remember, I said that if my story reaches 100k reads, I'll reward you guys with a 5 chapter update. Which means I won't do the 5 chapters until that happens.

 

With that said, I will add a chapter or two before that happens. So the shower chapter may happen before I do the 5 chapters in a day. At the rate it's at, it looks like I'll reach those views on Monday or Tuesday, which means that I'll update the 5 chapters next Friday or Saturday since it will take a while to do all 5. Don't worry, I intend to keep that promise. But I am waiting for my story to get to 100k views to make it special :D

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2016 12:03 AM Title: Wake up bro!

Uh oh. No one showed up to the pizza party last night. It's Saturday now. Will the party be Saturday night then?

Author's Response:

Ahhh I was worried about that xD. See thing is, Friday was my last day of work for my rotation so my co-workers invited me over and we all hang out. No pizza was involved, I wouldn't leave you guys out xD. But today I just moved in my dorm and then shit started getting mixed up so I may be switching dorm buildings tomorrow or Monday. It's been a total Fuster Cluck and I am just getting my shit together so I can properly write you guys a chapter. I certainly wouldn't want to write a shitty chapter simply just to rush and write one. Sorry for the delay again, but I plan to resume some time soon.

Reviewer: JTH2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2016 8:37 AM Title: Wake up bro!

I will admit that I'm starting to get a bit confused with all these names that begins with a J. I keep having to remind myself which character is being used which is quite annoying.

However, take nothing away from you, this is a great story with all the right ingredients to it. It is definitely one of my favourite stories on this site, and the best story that's being written at the moment. Please keep this story going as I feel that you've gotten started! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words. 

 

Allow me help you. So far, the only J named characters or Jennifer, and Jessica. Jennifer is Kaylee's friend, and Kaylee is Drake's younger sister. So you can associate Jennifer with "young" since she is around the same age as Kaylee. 

 

Jessica you may remember from chapter 2. Her character was very quickly introduced and we haven't seen her until very recently. She was one of Drake's best friends. So she is the same age as Drake since they are both in the same grade. 

I hope this helps! 

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2016 5:14 AM Title: Wake up bro!

Unaware asshole entrapment, my absolute favourite. Hope he has another chapter in there (^-^)



Author's Response:

Oh he most definitely will. I plan on keeping him undiscovered longer than any of the rest of the times. 

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2016 10:29 AM Title: Wake up bro!

Sorry about not reviewing been really lazy. Doesnt stop me from constantly checking here every hour to see if you added though.  I'm really obsessed with this story, I really love it.  Haven't read yesterdays chapters yet.  Kind of curious whos written more you or tomspeedy lol.  Even though people aren't reviewing you can rest assured that everyone loves it, Read Count: 70662!



Author's Response:

Haha it's no biggy. I am so happy you are enjoying my story. I sometimes question if I wrote things right or not. But Hopfully I won't dissapoint :D

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2016 8:28 PM Title: Wake up bro!

I want to see Drake's mom's reaction when she finds out she had sex with her son and that she is not any better than her girlfriend.



Author's Response:

Well, she may be horrified that's for sure. Although, it will be interesting to find out how she handles it. The real trick is finding a method of trying to write in that she finds out.

Reviewer: Donnert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2016 10:23 PM Title: Wake up bro!

I cannot wait to see how this story unfolds. I wonder how Rachel will.introduce Drake to Christine? Like the previous reviewer hypothesized, Rachel may disguise or make Drake unrecognizable.  She could attach him in some manner to a toy and then be used unaware (heart skips a beat thinking of it). Last but not least, Christine could hand Ricky over to Rachel for some rough play. Once Christine turns around to accept Ricky, Rachel swaps the boys out. Ricky goes into Rachels purse as her desired shrunken man and Drake is in for one hell of a ride. Either way my anticipation is growing for the next chapter. I appreciate your clear warnings regarding the male interaction. While it's not my thing, I can appreciate that others enjoy it and I won't stop reading your wonderful story because of it. 

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2016 5:37 AM Title: Wake up bro!

Awesome read so far man. Love the character development. My favorite part was when Kait tried to make Drake be taped to Kaylees panties unaware. Although it didn't work, do you think she could try it again maybe with Kaylees shoes to "punish him" for being a "perv"?

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'll see if I can make something work for ya ;) I have some good things planned out for Kaylee and her brother.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2016 9:58 PM Title: Wake up bro!

I'm guessing the woman is a teacher. That's my guess. If it was his teacher, might be fun if she takes him to class while he is with her.

For other ideas, she can stop him in her cleavage. I'm sure a middle aged woman has larger breasts than a typical teen girl.

Another idea that touches a few body parts is when he is in her mouth, she uses her tongue to push him out of her mouth and she slides down her chest into her cleavage and then he slides down her stomach and before he falls to his doom, she opens the waistband of her underwear to catch him.

If she wants to play and be controlling, she can tie up his limbs, tape his mouth and then insert him inside her. That may be too far, but if she is that horny, why not.

If her hair is long enough, she can loop some string to hang down from her hair and tie Ricky to one end. As she walks, Ricky will be bouncing off her ass with each step.

If they take a shower together, he could be the loofa.

There are lots of ideas out there. But first, I want to know who she is and what kind of giantess will she be, gentle, cruel, naughty, mischievous, or what. I think of a lot will be answered next chapter.

Reviewer: santiago1985 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2016 8:34 PM Title: Wake up bro!

About chapter 4. I liked this version more than the previous one. Remember that you still have to change the old end chapter notes.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so as well. And ah yes thank you for letting me know! 

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