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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2019 10:47 PM Title: Mind if I Butt In?

Oh shit oh shit oh shit!!! O_O

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Date: December 27 2017 3:50 PM Title: Mind if I Butt In?

Hot damn... 

Reviewer: JTH2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 1:35 PM Title: Mind if I Butt In?

I can see the next chapter going in one of 3 ways
1) She will find him and be cruel to him
2) She will find him and be kind and caring( maybe a little bit intimate ;) )
3) She will be unaware of everything, leaving Drake to suffer underneath her.

I honestly don't mind which way this goes as I love this story and I'm sure that you'll do a great job.

Author's Response:

Haha well you just listed the ONLY three options I had to go from. Unless I be a cock blocker and give everyone blue balls by letting him escape again lol. Thank you for complimenting the story and thank you for your review. I am just simply doing the best I can as I have limited writing experience.

Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 12:25 PM Title: Mind if I Butt In?

This is great so far, looking forward to more

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 10:52 AM Title: Mind if I Butt In?

I hope kaitlyn finds him again. At the same time just reread where they are they sell "toys" lol. Finally caught up, this is definitely one of my favorite stories.  Just thought about ricky maybe its kaylees mom, kaitlyn might find him and have fun.



Author's Response:

Haha yes. "Toys" However as far as toys I am purly meaning sex toys. There is no hidden meaning. So far, Ricky and Drake are the only two shrinkies.

 

And you'll just have to wait and see here in a little while :P I am so happy you are favouring this story. I am getting much praise and this gives me motivation for sure.

Reviewer: DiscardedToy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 12:23 AM Title: Mind if I Butt In?

I absolutely love this story so far; it might actually even be my favorite (and I've read quite a few). The unaware and accidental stuff is my favorite, but I love the variety you have going so far, and would like to commend you on creating more believable characters than most other people on here, and for not doing everything I would predict (I have gotten so use to the stories here just moving from one event to the next that I didn't even consider him escaping his first panty prison).

I legitimately can't wait for the rest. Thanks for the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the great review :) I purposefully created the anticipation of his first panty prison strictly to create tension for the reader. Like, "ohh gosh that was so close I was sure he would have been in there for sure." The reason I did that was because it was his sister Kaylee. And they both are close to each other. She would never harm him and she'd feel bad if she did. So I wanted to make any sexual reaction with them as "special" and unique as possible. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2016 9:37 PM Title: Mind if I Butt In?

Well, this cliffhanger is even better than the last chapter! I bet Drake has his adrenaline kicking in right now.

Either Drake is going to be scared and get out, or he is attracted to Jennifer and decides to stay. Or Drake tries to escape but realizes that it's too late.

You missed a great opportunity when mom showed up. They should have hugged! That way it's a mammary sandwich with Drake stuck in the middle. I think you should do that next time when someone is stuck in a bra.

As far as ideas go, my favorite one is similar to what you did with Kaylee's thong. However this time, this woman ties Ricky to the front of her panties. His back is against the fabric and his wrists and ankles are bound to it. Instead of unaware, she could talk to him dirty about keeping him there all day. (She won't keep him there all day, but it's to scare him.) Also, she could be horny just having this young man please her.

I'm not sure who this woman is, but if she has a husband, she can play with Ricky and hide him when her husband is lurking around.

For unaware, I like the thought of him falling from somewhere and he lands in a high heel and he can't get out since the heel is too high. Also, if she has some clothing on the floor while Ricky is on it, she can pick up the clothes sending Ricky on in mid air and possibly landing on her.

Then there is the necklace. Not exactly sexy, but it's a cool idea. A simple string to both arms and we wraps the strong around her neck. Also, there are versions like a belt, and he is hanging from it so he is dangling in front of her private area.

If this woman has a little kid, this little kid can put Ricky in spots where he gets close calls (or intimate encounters) with the woman. An example would be the woman prepares a bath and the kid just throws Ricky in the tub and he is stuck awaiting the woman.

I think with this woman, I would like it if she saw him and played with him. If you decide on unaware, that's cool too, but I think this woman will get what she wants if she sees him.

Another idea is the superblowjob. She puts his member between her lips and sucks. She could then put him inside her mouth afterwards. Maybe, as a mature giantess, she can get kinky and use bondage on Ricky. Tape, rubber bands, string, floss, hair bands. Lots of items to tie him up.

(This following idea is from another story.Not mine.)Another idea is this woman has another tiny man that got infected by the rock and she keeps him prisoner and all wrapped up so he looks like a mummy. Then Ricky unwraps him and frees him. However, the guy that he freed decides to wrap up Ricky so the woman won't be looking for him since she still has a mummified person to play with but she doesn't recognize that it's a different person.

She can use Ricky as a mouth wash. Take some listerene in her mouth. Drop Ricky in her mouth, and swish him all around giving him a bath in the process. Her teeth and Ricky are clean.

For desert, she can dip in something sweet and then suck on his body like a popsicle.

Well, that's all I can think of right now. I have a feeling that you probably knew most of these ideas judging by how clever your ideas already are.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Whoa! That's a ton of brainstorming you have already done there. I think I may have something for you in future chapters. It could mix a combination of your ideas as well so it works out. Some of them I may not do, not because they aren't good ideas, but mainly because they may not ever have a situation that calls for it. Example would be the necklace idea. However, being any type of accessory may work out. We'll see. You're not going to be disappointed next chapter I promise ;)

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