Reviewer: MacroGod Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2019 4:28 PM Title: The Things We Do For Love

Damnnnnn... The “World’s Best Sibling” award officially goes to Kaylee for that painful rescue… O_O lol

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2016 11:27 AM Title: The Things We Do For Love

Nice Game of Thrones reference. I love that phrase. It fit beautifully into the chapter too.

Part of me felt like Kaylee knew she could have gotten Drake out more simply, but she wanted to tease him like always and decided to lick him and put him in her vagina.

I think she could've just take him with her hands. (I'm sure she could still be gentle.) Then she can put him in between her toes behind her while still looking at Jennifer so she doesn't suspect anything. Then Kaylee can stretch her foot out behind her and release her brother away from the action on the far side of the bed.

Also, since Kaylee is considered the expert by Jennifer, Kaylee could've taken advantage of this and make Jennifer do all sorts of things to stall her and Jennifer might believe her. Yes, Jennifer was impatient, but I think if Kaylee told her to "be patient she will enjoy it more", then Jennifer will understand and wait.

Also, couldn't Kaylee, just say, "this is making me wet, let me use the bathroom first" while she had Drake in her vagain?

While I think there were many methods of getting Drake out safely, I'm glad you kept this approach becuase it was very entertaining.

Yeah, Drake and Kaylee will defiantely have a talk. Drake might say "was that necessary sis?" Kaylee might blush and then say "yes" with a smile on her face.

Wouldn't it be more fun if Kaylee just told Jennifer that her brother was in her panties and you could play with him? That way, Kaylee didn't have to go thru all that and also she can see Jennifer and her brother bonding. (Sort of.)

Great chapter nonetheless. I can wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Ahh yes. The outcome you proposed could be good for an alternative version of that chapter.

For this chapter though, I wanted to attract readers to the idea of Kaylee trying to hide her brother, while trying not to be sexual at all. Kaylee didn't even want to do it in the first place but her friend provided her with an opportunity to get Drake without her noticing. While your points of the different ways she could have taken him and kept him safe were good, the path she chose was the least obvious as Jennifer just simply thought Kaylee was trying to be sexy. Even after Jennifer violated her friends ass, she still was oblivious to the fact that Kaylee didn't actually want to do it. She was just trying to protect Drake. So that talk that Kaylee and Drake will have isn't going to be the best of talks. Kaylee does Love her brother, but right now she is trying to determine if what she did was worth it.