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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2019 10:37 PM Title: Setting the Playing Feild

Oh my... O_O

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2016 1:21 PM Title: Setting the Playing Feild

Damn she even told him she wanted him to fear her, yet he answered what he didn't like.  Love how he was fine with pleasing her but she doesn't want his consent.  I'm kind of curios what will happen if she finds out about her son, or even if Kaylee finds Ricky.



Author's Response:

My play here was to make the reader think, even if just a moment, that she was actually wanting to put him in her vagina. I conveyed that by letting her make Ricky think that was where she was going to put him as well. I plan on making the chapter with them two VERY detailed when they both arrive home for that evening.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2016 9:39 PM Title: Setting the Playing Feild

I can't believe Ricky didn't realize that what Christine was going to do when she asked "what he didn't like?" I mean, this was right after she said that she wanted him to fear her.

What was Ricky thinking?! He should have said that he hated feet or panties so Christine will put him there to intimidate him. Well, that's what I would have done. Fake my fear and then enjoy her putting me in a place where I like.

That boss scene was 10/10. I love the foot domination she did. Like the way she dragged her foot accoss his body and her boss had no idea when she was going to strike! Her foot was like a cobra, waiting to be unleashed.

The boss probably gave her a job in the first place becuase she was attractive. Her skills then granted her as manager. That combo of looks and skills will always land jobs even in the real world.

When Christine said the she let him out for fresh air, I was thinking "yeah, right. She is going to use him somehow". I was kinda right. She put him in her bum and he is still tied up which is amazing!

"Just wait until tonight". It seems like this ass detention is nothing compared to tonight. Will Rachel be there? Will she fuck him for hours? Will she make him sleep inside her? I'm just curious how her naughty game will be better tonight.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Don't worry, next chapter will come soon enough :D should be about Drake this time. Then the one after that will pick up where Ricky left off. I hadn't planned on juggling them back and forth but it may be the best option. Then again, if any one of their chapters gets too intense for a wait, I may conitune their experience with the next chapter.

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