Reviewer: MacroGod Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2019 11:38 PM Title: When Lambs Become Lions

YAY! Things are finally starting to look up for Ricky and Drake! And I’ve got to admit, Ricky and Kaylee make a pretty great team. I just hope this rescue mission turns out a success, and maybe they can get Jessica to help them find a new device to turn them back to normal when this is all said and done? ;) Well at least there’s hope haha 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2016 5:20 PM Title: When Lambs Become Lions

I don't mind the delay, but the change from a sexy chapter to a plot chapter did make feel a bit sad, especially since I was expecting a Christine vs Ricky domination to happen.

Instead he winds up with Kaylee and does some secret agent spy scheming with her. While that's cool, I would rather see Ricky being fucked persistently by Christine. I felt like Christine this chapter. It was going to be awesome, but then Rachel ruins it and Ricky escapes. When Chrstine yelled in the house, I was thinking, "yup, join the club."

Good news is that I am excited to see that Rachel has captured Drake. I'm also glad that you will write up a chapter describing that encounter. I would love to see the look of Drake's face when he realizes that Rachel was the worst idea he ever thought of.

I thought Ricky was kinda of a goofball. He gave me the impression of that low esteem guy that cannot think outside the box. He said he hated the "ass" and got punished, which was a poor move, but here, he was able to figure out that Rachel might have Drake and that Drake may have escaped Jennifer and asked for Rachel for assistance. Seems like Ricky read this story like some cheat codes. I really doubt that he was able to just think of all that. It just seems unlikely.

Why does Rachel want to show Drake to his mom? Wouldn't Christine just tell Rachel that it's not ok for her to use her son like that and that she should hand him over? I think it would be a smarter decision if Rachel keeps Drake to herself similarly to how Christine was keeping Ricky to herself.

You know what I think? Rachel wraps Drake up with some rubberbands/ribbons/tape so Chrsitine cannot tell that it's Drake. Rachel should just say that she found some random guy and decided to play with him. I bet Christine will join in on the fun and abuse Drake as if it's not her son.

Here is my list of favorite giantess in this story:

1. Rachel. Her aggressive nature and dominance just outshines everyone and she wants to be in control. It seems like no one can stop her and she gets what she wants. She also seems experienced, something that makes me believe that she has played with men before and knows how to us them.

2. Christine. Similarly to Rachel, she loves to be in control. I also love her teasing, the way she likes to tease Ricky was awesome. Her feelings for Ricky seem like a weakness and I think she needs to make him fear her again.

3. Jennifer. I know we didn't get to see much of her, but her personality makes it seem like she is always horny and that she must get her desire to be in control from her mother.

4. Kaitlyn. She doesn't give a shit about anything and that kinda appeals to me. However, she lacks the sexiness that other giantesses have. I don't see much emotion with her, but her actions are by far one of the best in this story.

5. Kaylee. She is last. One, her age. Second, it's her brother. However, she is still a giantess. She just needs to find another guy to play with and it will be much better. I love her playful attitude, but when it becomes sexually playful with Drake, it seems off to me. Maybe, Ricky in her hands will change that.

I'm glad that you agree that we Shiism have a discussion here. Im just not sure if it will ever happen. I can see a lot of reads and views. Just not enough reviews to match that. Maybe I'm covering all the points that everyone thinks about. Maybe, no one wants to post their review next to my essay of a review. I remember when I started writing reviews that I felt intimidated to write my review after a giant one from someone else. Or, maybe no one wants to discuss with me, becuase I keep taking all the ideas. Either way, I'm sure more people will review soon.

For the next chapter, I hope Rachel gets kinky with Drake. I hope it's not just a "hey, look a tiny! Yes! Get in my ass!" And that's it. I'm crossing my fingers for some foreplay.

I can't wait for the next chapter! (Will it be tonight?)

Author's Response:

I smiled the whole way through reading your review. Especially when it got to the part of you trying to figure out why Rachel would willingly take Drake to his mom. Let's just say I have certain ideas that I would like to try and make come to a reality and you may have to pick up your jaw from the floor. Well. I mean, it won't be THAT big of an idea.

 

I've been trying to see if I can do the best I can to prevent seeming repetative and unfortunately as I look back on some chapters, it seems like they follow a formula, especially when it comes to ass. No surprises there since I said at the beginning that I favor ass play. I did intentionally write the ass play in this chapter to be like, "Yep no surprise, been there done that." In this case, her ass is just a transport device for this purpose. And the fact that Rachel enjoys the idea of having her Lover's son shoved up her ass.

I did take your advice to give Kaylee someone to interact with, which is why I pulled Drake away from her. Ricky won't be who she interacts with, I may not give her anything new until way later. Hell I am brainstorming every night and the way it's going, I may even make a series out of this. Don't get your hopes up too much though. I am still thinking about it. Also, Kaitlyn will indeed get more chapters to play. The long male chapter will come back for sure and this time it will indeed feature a real male dick instead of a strap on.

Whether or not it's going to be unaware has yet to be decided.

I am trying to tweak this story as I go and make it the best I can. Which is why Chapter 4 got a rewrite a very long time ago and Drake actually didn't end up being in Kaylee's thong while she was unaware.