Reviewer: MacroGod Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2019 12:20 PM Title: The Lion Sleeps Tonight

Oh god... O_O

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2016 8:15 PM Title: The Lion Sleeps Tonight

Yay! You're back! And with nice chapter!

I loved how it was action packed and there is lots to talk about.

To get this started, that's a long nap that Ricky had. I bet if it weren't for that alarm, he would be snoozing until next morning.

When Ricky got the thumbtack, I just knew it was going to be used on a human. Animal? Unlikely. The real danger are the giantesses for Ricky.

Did you see that? Drake wanted Rachel to find Ricky so he can be free instead. How selfish! Drake totally deserved this. And the best part...Rachel gets to keep him even longer.

So Chrsitine gets fucked by Rachel and then Chrsitine fucks Ricky. Interesting to see Chrsitine be the dominant and the submissive. Rachel on the other hand is completely dominant and I love that.

If I was Ricky and I saw Drake on that strap on, I would have just watched have sex. I mean, these are two horny milfs about to go at it with a tiny with them. That's quite a show.

Wouldn't it be funny if Ricky was still in Chrsitine's ass and then Drake and Ricky could have a little reunion? Then Drake is pushing Ricky deeper and deeper inside Chrsitine.

Wait, how is Kaitlyn there? Didn't Kaylee tell Ricky that Kaitlyn was out all day? Or was I mistaken? Also, why didn't Kaitlyn go after Ricky in the closet? It felt unlike Kaitlyn to just let him hide in there.

"Well what do you think we should do then Ricky?" I thought Kaylee was thinking about having fun with Ricky. The way that was phrased made me think that she was anxious for some more boy toy time and this time it wasn't her brother.

Ricky going to spy on Chrsitine? Haha! I have this awesome feeling that Ricky will blow his cover and Chrsitine will find him. I can't wait for what she has in store for him since she lost him the first time. You know now she won't let him out of her sight anymore.

Kaylee asking Jennifer? For what? You already know that Drake is with Rachel or with Christine. If I was Kaylee, I would keep my friendship with Jennifrr and not ask such a daring question. Kaylee already knows that Jennifer is a liar anyway. So why bother asking?

Wow! Great writing! Sending Drake back where he came from inside Christine. Also, when Drake wanted to stop, but Christine wanted more, I was laughing. That was a good one.

That's embarrassing Chrsitine. Your best orgasm was with your son. Haha!

Wow! Not even Christine was able to make Rachel stop when she wanted. You must very scared for Drake becuase you know Rachel isn't done with him tonight.

Wait, was Rachel trying to get Ricky? Or was she just trying to make Drake suffer? Both? I'm pretty sure Rachel just wanted to fuck Drake relentlessly and she even forgot about Ricky.

After that event, Rachel should have out Drake in her panties to let him know that she wants more and that she is done for the night. Drake could then feel her getting wet as Rachel is thinking about it.

Rachel giving Drake to Jennifer for a moment? What? Knowing Rachel, I thought it would be 24/7 detention with Drake. She should be taking him to work with her. Jennifer will probably lose Drake. I have this feeling that Jennifer won't give Drake back to Rachel when she gets him. Instead, I hope Rachel changes her mind and decides that when she says that Drake is hers, then she really means it and will keep him with her at all times.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I really appreciate this review. Well really I appreciate all of them but you pointed out a clear plot hole that I accidentally put. You are right. Kaylee did say Kaitlyn was out of the house for the day. Of course that would add to Ricky's surprise being that he didn't expect her whenever she pinned him down. I'll go back and add in some dialogue with Kaylee and Ricky of him getting a little pissed that Kaylee told him Kaitlyn was going to be there and her being wrong.

 

Also you make a good point about a few things. First off, what I had planned would have placed Drake back in Kaylee's hands. It wouldn't be a pleasant reunion though. Whis is why I wrote in that Jennifer may get Drake. Also, Ricky still has some snooping around to do when Kaylee is at school. But do you know who doesn't have school or work? That's right, you guessed it. The next day is only going to be Tuesday in the timeline so Christine is going to have work as well as Rachel. I could write that Rachel takes Drake with her. Or I can keep it the way I am going. Either way I'll think and brainstorm on it some more. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter though. Had unwilling and unaware incest in it and I think that's a common favorite among us tinies. It being unaware and all. Anything forced is sexy to us since we are submisive little bastards xD