Reviewer: MacroGod Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2019 5:36 PM Title: Life is Full of Surprises (And Lemons)

HOLY. FUCK. O_O

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2016 12:26 AM Title: Life is Full of Surprises (And Lemons)

Before I get started, a pizza party this Friday means that you should have a chapter on Friday as well. :)

Back to this chapter. This one felt very real to me. I feel like I'm in the friend zone with a few girls who always seem to be friendly but not too friendly or flirty. This chapter made me think about them. While some of those friends don't seem like 10, you honestly can't tell becuase they dress up so formally. I'm not kidding, Jessica really reminds me of them.

Now Jessica is saying that she was friends with Drake just becuase she liked him? Wow, I bet you know what I'm thinking. Do the girls that I am friends with actually like me? I'm not going to test it, but I will keep this in mind.

Jessica is very refreshing. She didn't even care that Drake puked in her hand, or even was staring at her crotch! Most giantess stories would have the girl be pissed and punish the guy. I found this alternative a nice touch.

What I like about this story is how fast everything goes. So much action and there is so much variety. There is the stepsister, stepmom, classmate, sister's classmate, sister's classmate's mom, classmate's mom, and what they do to each tiny is different! It's amazing how so much has happened to these guys and it's never the exact same thing. There is always a little variation of it which keeps things interesting.

Also, you don't focus on one giantess too long and I think it really makes it unpredictable since we have no idea who will get Ricky or Drake next.

I always love shower scenes. I love the cliffhanger in the end about her being dirty. This story could use more awesome cliffhangers like that.

I wonder how Jessica's mom will be. I know you like developing character, so you got another chance with her. I'm curious to see what giantess she will be like too.

Good point about the sperm thing. Most people don't even mention it since its kinda awkward to talk about it. For me, I'm not skipping anything. You can count on me reading and reviewing every since chapter you post. (I think you knew that already.)

Funny you mention Duggernaut and I in the end notes. Duggernaut kinda dedicated Tom's story to me since he liked one of my ideas and he decided to make a story based on it. We never knew it was going to be one of the most popular stories on the site, but people kept reviewing and reading it. It actually turned 1 year old about 3 weeks ago.

Good chapter. I love the new Jessica. Also, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you felt some since of reality and also relation to this chapter. Jessica is going to be a surprising character for Drake. She seems to hold confidence where she normally doesn't hold it. A Friday Chapter may very well happen lol. I should most likely have time to do it.