[Report This]Date: February 06 2019 5:51 PM Title: Dammdable Glue, and the Inconvenience of Inconveniencies
Fuckkkkk! Kaylee and Ricky? I could ship that lol. I mean at least Kaylee wouldn’t have to feel bad about her sexual urges because he actually likes her too ;)
Date: September 21 2016 11:15 AM Title: Dammdable Glue, and the Inconvenience of Inconveniencies
I forgot that I had to be signed in to write a review...
This has been an excellent story, in so far as creativity is concerned. Less so with regard to the English grammar and vocabulary. Unless the language has changed more than I was aware of in the last 50 years! None the less, I have enjoyed reading this story once I found the time to start. There are so many good writers here that I don't always have time to start new (to me) series by writers that I am not familiar with.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Lol I know my grammar could be better. I write with Microsoft Word so usually it spots it but not always. Sometimes it corrects things that I didn't want to correct. But I am glad you like this story so far.
[Report This]Date: August 22 2016 3:46 PM Title: Dammdable Glue, and the Inconvenience of Inconveniencies
Never enough butt!
If you really want to torture ricky, this time have kaylee catch him and think I trusted you your just a pervert and have her put him in a situation with rachel.
Also you should check out Inconvenient Coincidence. Love the whole basis just wish it wasn't so foot centric. Maybe it will give you ideas for future chapters or stories.
[Report This]Date: August 21 2016 10:57 PM Title: Dammdable Glue, and the Inconvenience of Inconveniencies
NEVER ENOUGH BOOTY.
I like the way you write, because it is primarily the way I think. You don't drown the story in the booty and you don't have the story high and dry with out the booty, so it has a nice balance and still has good story. Great job and keep it up. You have built quite the story and I willl read more awaiting a great conclusion!
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHA I like the way you think. That should be my motto for my writing.
NEVER ENOUGH BOOTY!! NEVER TOO MUCH BOOTY!!!
So glad you are liking this so far!
[Report This]Date: August 21 2016 9:37 PM Title: Dammdable Glue, and the Inconvenience of Inconveniencies
Hmm. 11 days without a chapter. I don't blame you for all your moving in stuff. I'm in the middle of that and I got to pack the rest of my stuff to take with me this week. Also, campus wifi sucks so I was thinking that maybe you had the same problem.
I have been checking everyday for a new update and I'm glad I didn't give up. A new chapter for a new day.
I cometely forgot that Ricky was with Kaylee. It was only until the middle of the chapter when you mentioned Ricky noticing her being aroused that I had my ligtbulb moment. (Maybe you could recap a bit since you had a big break.)
I remember when you uploaded once a day. Good times. :) of course, as you said, when life happens, it has priority over this story.
Ass men? Lol! I guess I'm a pussy man then. I'm still waiting for a Milf to get either Ricky or Drake and shove them inside it for pleasure. I can see it happening to Jessica's mom soon. (Crossing fingers.)
5 chapters in a single day?!! Whoa, don't go overboard. How about you do like 2 chapters on Friday and 3 on Saturday. Or 1 on Friday, 2 on Saturday and 2 on Sunday. 5 chapters in one day can take a toll on you.
For Ricky, how about he escapes, and Kaitlyn finds him again and this time, tapes and gags Ricky to Christine's panties! Then they can have a little reunion. Now that would be awesome. Chrsitine can discover him there and then decide to keep him there. She will finally have her fun with him. Last time, Ricky freaking escape and I have been waiting for Ricky to be with her. Man, that's what I'm anxious for.
Perhaps, Jessica is the kinky one and after her shower, she lets her mom have some fun and they have a threesome and she lets her mom keep Drake have him for the night and he can sleep tied up in the front of her panties. Obviously, you know which direction I want the story to go. All I can do is wait and hope you go that way too.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Haha I do intend to reward for 5 chapters in a single day. I am still kind of deciding what to do with Ricky at this point. Poor guy has suffered alot. But honestly I kind of like making him suffer as the writer lol. I am such a horrible person I know. We will have to see what happens. Next chapter will involve Drake and Jessica and that's going to be a fun one to write for sure.