[Report This]Date: February 06 2019 9:55 PM Title: Little Exercise Never Hurt Anyone
Thank God Kaylee is the only responsible person in this situation! Maybe she’s stepping up and acting like a parental figure since her actual mom sucks and hasn’t been any help… lol I think Kaylee might actually be my favorite character right now. I mean she’s not perfect, and she has her urges too, but at least she actually puts an effort into trying to keep herself under control. It kind of makes her more human and relatable in a sense.
Another great chapter! Especially since I love Kaylee and Ricky together ;)
[Report This]Date: January 01 2018 8:55 AM Title: Little Exercise Never Hurt Anyone
I have an issue with this chapter. Earlier in the story, Kaylee had no issue putting Drake her pocket, but all of a sudden it's a 'tight' space? It doesn't really make sense, and the excuse seems odd :/
Author's Response:
Eh I can't remember the chapter where I had Kaylee put Drake in her pocket.
I usually have Kaylee as a person who mainly wears dresses so I find it odd myself that I wrote her wearing pants.
That would have fixed the excuse issue and the plot hole issue but oh well. Shit happens during writing.
I don't plan ahead my chapters. I actually brainstorm them as I write with a VERY general idea of where I want to go so hopefully you can forgive me for being a little absent minded xD
Thanks for pointing that out though!
[Report This]Date: September 03 2016 3:24 PM Title: Little Exercise Never Hurt Anyone
That must be a lot of sweat to free Ricky from his confinement. Very creative in using the sweat as a means to free him. I thought Ricky was going to be stuck in her ass and eventually, she just has to check. But this was is much better.
Haha! As soon as Ricky mentions Kaitlyns's antics, Kaylee stays quiet understand that her sister probably would have don't that. That means that Kaylee definatley knows a lot about her sister.
Wow, Ricky has spent so much time with ass. I mean, it's like half this story is about Ricky next to some girl's ass. It's kinda funny. Then he gets called a pervert a lot. Also funny since he got tied up in her panties. I love it when Kaitlyn frames Ricky.
Back to square one with Ricky with Kaylee. Maybe Kaylee thinks that Ricky is a bad boy and gives him to her mom to punish him. Like you said, Kaylee just can't get a break. Both problems solved if Chrsitine gets Ricky. :)
I can't wait for the next chapter!