[Report This]Date: February 06 2019 11:37 PM Title: A Most Awaited Reunion
Holy fuck that was hot! And at least Ricky made it out in one piece ;) lol
[Report This]Date: January 01 2018 9:23 AM Title: A Most Awaited Reunion
I wanna fuck Christine LOL
Date: September 21 2016 7:29 PM Title: A Most Awaited Reunion
I seem to have caught up with you, so I'll acknowledge the fact with another review.
Your originality has not deteriorated in the slightest... but I still have problems with your spelling... such as 'grinded' as opposed to 'ground'; 'drug' when 'dragged' should have been used, and others of this nature. Perhaps this is characteristic of British spelling? I have never studied English from the UK, so I can't be certain. For me it sounds 'off', just as Brits use plural verbs with singular organisations (like 'team', 'company' or such groupings). As a North American (Canadian in particular, with an American background) technical writer, who wrote in 'Simplified English for Non-English Speaking Aviation Technicians', I had to stick to very strict rules (written by a Frenchman, believe it or not!). But don't mind me... I still enjoy your tale quite well... Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Haha you're the first gammar Nazi I've encountered on this site. I figured I would encounter at least one but I am also not an English major. Not even close lol. Plus this is the first time I've done some extensive writing. Not to mention that I usually try and write in a hurry because on average, writing one chapter takes me about an hour to write. I don't do any brainstorming unless I have free time to think so for the most part each chapter is thrown together as I write it with very little direction. I keep in my the one big direction I am taking the story in, and I keep the consistency in that regard. Once I know I am followingthe direction I need to go in, I usually brainstorm as I write. So combine that with writing in a hurry and you get a few mistakes here and there. I will try to do better with that in the future because I want this story to be comfortable to read to ALL of my readers.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2016 6:02 PM Title: A Most Awaited Reunion
Everyone is ricky bashing, so I just wanted to say I actually look forward to those the most. It would be nice if he tried to speak up again, but given his size no one will care. It's actually funny how diffrent they are drake is in heaven everyone usually listens to him, except that part with rachel. But then ricky is just ignored it's all about what the women want. Would be nice to remind drake of that.
Author's Response:
Haha thanks for the Ricky support. By they way, there will be plenty of room for unwanted encounters for both Drake and Ricky when I get to the climax of this story.
Date: September 21 2016 2:46 PM Title: A Most Awaited Reunion
I get what you're saying, but she knew he was there and knew Ricky as Drake's friend, and she wasn't at all bothered by it. I know Rachel destroyed the device, but still, she knew of Ricky at the time and didn't seem to care that her son's friend would possibly stay like that for the rest of his life when they destroyed the device.
Yes, she's more hospitable, but she's done some bad things too with full knolwedge of Ricky's existence (even though she didn't know Drake was in a similar predicitment). Of course does it ruin the story? No. It's something small, and honestly, it's only my opinion.
I like Drake a lot as a character with limits in the crazy situation he's in. Kaylee is an interesting character too, along with the vast majority of the other characters in the story. So overall a good story, and again, it's only my opinion.
Author's Response:
No worries. I totally want your opinions to be honest. I was just trying to help explain it from a different perspective. Also, they couldn't have Ricky telling everyone about their affair :P
[Report This]Date: September 21 2016 12:23 PM Title: A Most Awaited Reunion
Reading this story, I feel like Ricky, as a character is too weak willed.
Perhaps it's just me but I think Ricky is missing a character arc so to speak. He started out weak and he's stayed that way. I mean Ricky is just pushed over, basically stomped on, mistreated and treated like an object. At one point I'm just expecting him to snap.
I mean don't get me wrong or anything, it isn't a big deal. But after all the things Ms. Dobson has done to Ricky, betraying his trust, forcing him into hers and Rachel's playtime against his will etc. but one blowjob and the promise of others somehow makes it better. To me, it doesn't, after all that's happened to him because of her.
I feel that he shouldn't even consider accepting the deal. maybe tell her off for all she's done, including idly watching Rachel intentionally as she destroyed the device which means Drake and him at present can't go back to normal. She didn't get angry or anything, she even went along with it putting Ricky on her stap on. To me he should be far angrier at Christine, unless he did it to get to Kaylee faster, which would explain why he basically shrugged off the other question.
Overall, I like the story it's just Ricky is just too weak willed and everyone seems to just ignore that Christine has done incredibly horrible things for Drake (by destroying the dvice) and to Ricky (almost all their encounters), but that's just my one nag.
Author's Response:
Keep in mind that Rachel was the one who destroyed the device. If Christine had known about Drake at the time, she wouldn't have sat by and watched it happen. At the same time, Christine is much more hospitable than Rachel although no less demanding. Ricky probably feels safer with her than Kaitlyn or Rachel. But not as safe as he feels with Kaylee even despite hitching a ride in her ass for a day.
He was never meant to be a strong willed character even in the beginning. However, as I play events out later, he will soon become a pretty likable character even though he's had the worst things happen to him than to Drake.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2016 8:34 PM Title: A Most Awaited Reunion
Dangggggg, this just made my Tuesday complete
Drake is finally going to get f'ed up and this time he isn't going to be forced into it and he gets Jessica, the one giantess in this who isn't trying to keep him dis way, cheers mates!!!! ;)
Also I'll keep the email if I ever need to contact you! :)
Author's Response:
Haha glad you liked it :P
Also the email wasn't for you having a NEED to contact me. It's if you WANT to contact me. *hint* *hint* ;P
[Report This]Date: September 20 2016 8:24 PM Title: A Most Awaited Reunion
You mean this was not the awesome stuff? I think this was one of the best chapters in a while.
I miss Christine. I love her seductiveness and her aggressive attitude. I would love to spend every night with her and participate in her experiements. (Maybe the new Tom character can end up in her clutches.)
That hour felt fast. To me, it was like 10 minutes. I think if you mentioned something like "and after many orgasms from Christine, her time was up". Something to show that time has elapsed. Instead it kinda felt like she orgasmed every 30 seconds.
Erotic chapter, not sure if the awesome chapter will beat this one, but I can't wait for the next chapter!