This chapter felt long, I like it.

When the group walked in on Ricky and Drake, you mentioned "Tom and Ricky looked on over" when it should have been Drake and Ricky. Hmm. I guess you are already mistaking me as the shrunken guy already. :)

And yes! I DEEPLY want my character to be shrunken. Not only shrunken, but found by a naughty woman too (like Christina). Actually, I think you already know what I want, so I will stop right there.

Shusha is an interesting character. Like a female version of The Rock. If Jessica's plan doesn't work, plan B is just to send Shusha in to get the guards.

Well, there are so many things happening in this plan, so something is bound to not got according to plan. Good thing they went over back up plans.

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Lol dang, I was trying my best not to mix up names xD. This chapter had so many characters talking to each other that I probably accidentally wrote it. Not to mention there is another story that I read on this site that has Tom as a protagonist xD. Oh well, I'll have to edit it in later, but you guys know exactly what I meant to put. And oh yeah, you're going to be shrunk. I just have to figure out a practical way for it to happen xD.