Date: June 04 2023 12:32 AM Title: Chapters 1-10 (from 2015)
Por favor continue a historia,foi uma das melhores que ja li
[Report This]Date: April 30 2022 12:52 AM Title: Chapters 1-10 (from 2015)
Okay that was great, still don't like incest but I can forgive that. What I can't forgive is you ending it right before it was getting good.
Date: October 29 2021 5:13 AM Title: Chapters 1-10 (from 2015)
Please please finish this story!! Its your best one and it's been so long, come on we are begging to see what happens between him and his step mom
Date: July 30 2017 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 16 ... 11-4-16
OK I love this story so pls pls pls pls finish it and get back in touch with me I really love your stories just pls finish this pls I'm begging you
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for your interest. I can't promise that I'll continue this, but I might add a chapter eventually. I'd say it's best to read other stories right now, because I really don't know when or if I'll continue this. Sorry. Thanks for reading.
Date: July 24 2017 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 16 ... 11-4-16
Pls finish this story I love it
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot.
Date: November 09 2016 5:34 PM Title: Chapters 1-10 (from 2015)
Hi jedi I really love your stories and your style. I was wondering if you would be interested in coauthoring a story with me similar to this story. Let me know! Biancamouse50@yahoo.com
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: November 06 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapters 1-10 (from 2015)
Interesting... I assumed that because of earlier chapters with the sister that the son would be a terrified prude once his mother discovered his boner. I had considered that she might want to play (regardless of whether she was strange or not, after all, it's a tiny hard-on) but that he would fight her tooth and nail. Apparently the sister frightens the hell out of him and the mother is viewed as benevolent. Cannot wait for more stuff. Really cool. Why can't I leave stars? I must be using the wrong skin for this website.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: November 05 2016 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 16 ... 11-4-16
So glad you returned to this story! Love this chapter and looking forward to more!
Kind of wish she had made him go retrieve the chip!
Author's Response:
Thanks
[Report This]Date: November 04 2016 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 16 ... 11-4-16
Time for mommy to suck on Mike. Anyone want chocolate Mike? I'm sure Colleen does!
Once again. Loving how Colleeen is open to Mike liking her. Looking forward to this relationship to grow.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: November 04 2016 10:57 AM Title: Chapters 1-10 (from 2015)
@Carycomic,
Congrats on 5 thousand reviews!
[Report This]Date: November 04 2016 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 16 ... 11-4-16
Hmmmm! I have to wonder if this is going to give him an "Edible Complex."
Author's Response:
That certainly could happen. Thanks
Date: November 04 2016 10:44 AM Title: Chapters 1-10 (from 2015)
Yes. You posted a new chapter for this story! I literally just refreshed the page to see this at the top!
Now I know what your break was for.....this story! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: October 01 2016 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 15 ... 8-12-16
"Everything is much bigger than you now, Mike. And I mean everything.”
Whoa! Simmer down, mom.
I hope you haven't given up on this story. Love the duality of mom's nourishment vs stepsister'a torment.
Author's Response:
That line by Mike's mom was walking the 'seductive line' of how she normally acts. I might continue this story in the future. Thanks for noticing the duality between 'nourishment' and 'torment'.
Date: August 25 2016 1:23 AM Title: Chapters 1-10 (from 2015)
Very nice. I love the details you're focusing on, and the premise is exactly the sort of thing I like in this fetish.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for commenting. Lots of fetish fun.
Date: August 23 2016 10:19 PM Title: Chapters 1-10 (from 2015)
I really like this story and I hope you continue it. You have a nice set up with Coleen and I like the contrast between her and Olivia. I think that your stuff helped push me to consider writing and contributing something here. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for your comments. I write what interests me, and I'm glad other people are interested in it, too.
[Report This]Date: August 19 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 15 ... 8-12-16
Huge fan of this story, love the direction and relationships between the characters. Hopefully you carry on writing this as I'm sure there's a lot more that can be explored.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for your comments. I'm glad the characters are interesting.
[Report This]Date: August 12 2016 8:51 PM Title: Chapters 1-10 (from 2015)
Seriously though, this story is awesome and I love the possible works you had listed out as well! You HAVE to continue this shiz, your writing of the mom element is so good, you can't just leave it like that suddenly! lol
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for commenting and reading. Your writing is enjoyable to read and includes fun topics.
Date: August 12 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 15 ... 8-12-16
*gulps*
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm not sure what will happen for Mike, but hopefully it will be entertaining.
[Report This]Date: August 12 2016 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 15 ... 8-12-16
This dynamic that is playing out in this family is great! KEEP IT COMING, FRIEND!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comments. I'm glad the story direction is interesting.
[Report This]Date: August 12 2016 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 15 ... 8-12-16
I love Colleen!
I think she knows that Mike has a boner and she just wants to expose him like that.
Hopefully, this leads into some even better teasing where Mike won't be able to avert his eyes.
Why didn't Mike hide behind something in the cage? If he really wanted to not let Olivia know where he was, he should have hid behind something. He doesn't need to see them talking. Listening to them is all he needs to do and he can determine where they are by the sound of their voices.
Yes, I would love a new story from you. I love Colleen's character and Mike's character. Olivia kind of annoys me, but other than that, this story is fantastic and I hope I will like your next one.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the character of Colleen. She balances out Olivia's character dynamic. I guess Mike was too frozen in fear to hide behind something at that moment when Olivia entered. Thanks for your comments.