Date: September 06 2016 1:46 PM Title: 1 foot, 11 inches (Date Night, pt 2)
Nice chapter for the little hero.
Thanks,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: August 26 2016 1:44 PM Title: 1 foot, 11 inches (Date Night, pt 2)
Love the sotry Happy! The descriptions are amazing and I find the pace to be thrilling. I'm really liking the polarity of Kimberly's feeling towards Andy and I look forward to seeing how they will pan out as the story continues.
Keep up the good work!
- (Not)Kent
[Report This]Date: August 26 2016 10:46 AM Title: 1 foot, 11 inches (Date Night, pt 2)
great one!! I'm hoping some action starts soon =P
Date: August 25 2016 3:22 PM Title: 1 foot, 11 inches (Date Night, pt 2)
Aww! Nice chapter
[Report This]Date: August 25 2016 2:52 PM Title: 1 foot, 11 inches (Date Night, pt 2)
Glad everything ended well. Though, now Kim may be aware of how far Mr Speed might go for her, wonder if this would fuel even more her feelings.
Author's Response: Very perceptive of you. Indeed, Kim's feelings for Andy become central in the next 2 chapters.
[Report This]Date: August 25 2016 12:57 PM Title: 1 foot, 11 inches (Date Night, pt 2)
It wasn't nearly as bad for Andy as I thought it would be. In fact, in a lot of ways (especially, the "little hero" remark), this chapter reminded me of Asukafan's classic gts-novel TALE OF THE SHY GUY AND THE LUSCIOUS CHEERLEADER!*
*Which used to have some nice, cleverly photo-manipulated illustrations, too.