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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2016 4:09 AM Title: 4 inches (Enbosomed, pt 2)

I enjoyed the run in with Paul. For him to be standing there like a boy looking up at a woman, it must have been humiliating and frustrating. Will there be another run in with Paul when he is maybe much smaller? Or maybe a separate chapter showing his life not going so well. Maybe he has a less forgiving babysitter.
Just wondering,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Patience, loyal reader! Paul still has a lot of shrinking to do.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2016 12:27 PM Title: 4 inches (Enbosomed, pt 2)

To paraphrase Alice in Wonderland: "Things are getting seriouser and seriouser."

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