Date: November 08 2016 3:53 AM Title: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 5)
Cool chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad you all didn't find it too intense.
[Report This]Date: November 07 2016 3:57 PM Title: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 5)
Hmmmmmm! I have mixed feelings about the next chapter. On the one hand, Paul and Brooke's departure means a return to the titular heroine of this story. On the other hand, you might decide to slightly divert from the main plot line by showing Paul and Brooke's week together at college. For example; his getting temporarily "confiscated" by some sophomore girl for her sorority.*
*A gimmick that's occasionally overdone, I admit. But, I still like the ones that are done in a delightfully original manner.
Author's Response:
I think Brooke and Paul's interactions are developed enough for the reader to fill in the blanks of what happened in college. If you can't get enough of Brooke, I recommend you wait for the... SEQUEL!!!
[Report This]Date: November 07 2016 3:40 PM Title: 3 feet, 2 inches (Birthday, pt 5)
Oh, no, ...I was right! (Careful what you wish for, ...) Mr. Pauly is going back to school!
Only, not like he had originally planned... his life has just completely changed; now, if he suddenly realizes, after a few days, that his size hasn't changed at all, ...and, he seems to be 'stuck' at three inches tall, my expectations will be correct! ;`)
I'd like to see Brookie force him to put lotion all over her naked body, make him sweat it out as she casually lays out in the sunlight, (Maybe on a rooftop or inside of a fenced in swimming pool area.
Maybe, he'll get lucky, and end up becoming the sorority mascot and get to be the entire colleges favorite!
I love where this is going, Great Stuff Man!
BTW, I re-read that last chapter, and I must have been half asleep when I read it the first time, ...but, your descriptions were just fine, sorry bout that, dude!
Author's Response:
As all of that sounds pretty cool, this is not a "college girls play with shrunken man" story. Duggernaut seems to be writing that story. Although the last chapter does intimate what Paul is in for, the story itself is winding down.