[Report This]Date: August 26 2016 10:46 AM Title: 1 foot, 11 inches (Date Night, pt 2)
great one!! I'm hoping some action starts soon =P
Date: August 25 2016 3:22 PM Title: 1 foot, 11 inches (Date Night, pt 2)
Aww! Nice chapter
[Report This]Date: August 25 2016 2:52 PM Title: 1 foot, 11 inches (Date Night, pt 2)
Glad everything ended well. Though, now Kim may be aware of how far Mr Speed might go for her, wonder if this would fuel even more her feelings.
Author's Response: Very perceptive of you. Indeed, Kim's feelings for Andy become central in the next 2 chapters.
[Report This]Date: August 25 2016 12:57 PM Title: 1 foot, 11 inches (Date Night, pt 2)
It wasn't nearly as bad for Andy as I thought it would be. In fact, in a lot of ways (especially, the "little hero" remark), this chapter reminded me of Asukafan's classic gts-novel TALE OF THE SHY GUY AND THE LUSCIOUS CHEERLEADER!*
*Which used to have some nice, cleverly photo-manipulated illustrations, too.
[Report This]Date: August 24 2016 7:16 AM Title: 1 foot, 11 inches (Date Night, pt 1)
If Andy's hunch proves wrong, he's going to immediately wish that he was already back to being "Normal" Speed.
[Report This]Date: August 23 2016 9:25 AM Title: 2 feet (Doctor's Visit)
She is right, Mr Speed.
[Report This]Date: August 22 2016 6:22 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Kudos to Kimberly for resisting so far. Ya got me on the edge of my seat!
[Report This]Date: August 22 2016 2:27 PM Title: 2 feet (Doctor's Visit)
One word: WHOA!
Date: August 22 2016 12:42 PM Title: 2 feet (Doctor's Visit)
The fact you are updating this daily is impressive really. And the content is vast for the speed of the updates as well.
As I've said I'm good with some development of characters before getting to the meat of the story really so I guess we will possibly see why happens tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: August 22 2016 12:42 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
I'm not a fan of Breasts, or at least I didn't think I was until this story. I'm also not fond of Gentle, but you seem to have almost convinced me.
I hate being the type of user that asks for certain content, but would there be any hope down the line of you doing any of the 'Butt' category for this story?
If it detracts from the plot you have, don't do it, I'm loving this story. But if the plot was flexible in any way, I'd love to see the 'Butt' category incorporated.
Thornton
[Report This]Date: August 22 2016 9:16 AM Title: 2 feet (Doctor's Visit)
looking forward to more~
Date: August 20 2016 6:03 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
I love this story :D. Keep it up :D
Date: August 20 2016 2:19 PM Title: 2 feet, 2 inches (Wife's Plans)
I'm OK with this. Some plot to move things along. At least now we know how long to expect the story to be since he is gonna be with her for a bit lol
[Report This]Date: August 20 2016 7:34 AM Title: 2 feet, 2 inches (Wife's Plans)
Two words: masterfully poignant
[Report This]Date: August 18 2016 6:51 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Awesome stuff!!!
Date: August 18 2016 6:34 PM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Wonderful story so far. The characters feel real and deep, and it's not the most conventional way of telling a story I've seen, somewhere between vignettes of different days of action and a concise narrative format that leaves out all the middle bits.
Date: August 18 2016 9:18 AM Title: 2 feet, 4 inches (Flirting)
Your attention to details is what really makes this a good read man. And you even doubled the length of the previous chapters on content on this one.
Definitely one of the few stories I am waiting to see how it ends!
A little dark side to Kim would be interesting but I doubt she would be the mean one here. Guess we will see !
[Report This]Date: August 18 2016 7:07 AM Title: 2 feet, 4 inches (Flirting)
Round 1 in this Battle of the Sexes to Andy. :-)
[Report This]Date: August 17 2016 1:39 PM Title: 2 feet, 6 inches (House Guest)
Wonderful story so far! I can´t wait to read more chapters. Like someone has already said, it would be perfect to see some unaware scenes and Andy being mistaken for another object.
Date: August 17 2016 4:56 AM Title: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation
Really neat, I greatly enjoyed these three chapters. Love the vignette format and your concentration on these two specific characters amidst a larger story.
Just the right level of character detail, and I'm quickly attached to your protagonists.